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Date: Sun, 6 Apr 2003 17:43:49 +0200
From: Jacek Prucia <jacek.prucia@acn.waw.pl>
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Subject: Re: apache 2.0; error mess., polish translation
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On Tue, 18 Mar 2003 11:17:38 +0100
Tomasz Babczy=F1ski <tb@gromit.ict.pwr.wroc.pl> wrote:

> Hi,
>  it is a proposition of translation of error messages in apache 2.0
> server into polish language.

Here comes promised review. Most of the issues I've found are minor nitpicks
(mostly titles). However, until we come to consensus -- I'm against (-1)
commiting original translation into main repo. Some sentences are misleading
IMHO. There's room for discussion here, so if anybody do not agree with me =
--
go ahead and bite me :)

regards,
Jacek Prucia

[...]
> Index: error/HTTP_BAD_GATEWAY.html.var
> =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D


> +<!--#set var=3D"TITLE" value=3D"Z=B3a bramka!"-->

s/bramka/brama/

...and I get the feeling that 'Z=B3a' is more related to person description,
rather than technical terms. How about: "Nieprawid=B3owa brama"


[...]
> +    Serwer proxy otrzyma=B3 niepoprawn=B1 odpowied=BC
> +    od poprzedniego serwera.

Not a big deal, but I would suggest "Serwer po=B6rednicz=B1cy" instead of "=
Serwer
proxy". But that's just me :)

[...]
> Index: error/HTTP_BAD_REQUEST.html.var
> =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
[...]
> +<!--#set var=3D"TITLE" value=3D"Z=B3e zapytanie!"-->

Same stuff here (s/Z=B3e/Nieprawid=B3owe/).

[...]
> Index: error/HTTP_FORBIDDEN.html.var
> =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
[...]
> +<!--#set var=3D"TITLE" value=3D"Wst=EAp wzbroniony!"-->

I think that "Dost=EAp zabroniony" would be much better here...

[...]
> Index: error/HTTP_GONE.html.var
> =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
[...]
> +<!--#set var=3D"TITLE" value=3D"Zas=F3b ju=BF niedost=EApny!"-->

How about: "Zas=F3b nie jest ju=BF dost=EApny".

[...]
> Index: error/HTTP_LENGTH_REQUIRED.html.var
> =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
[...]
> +    Zapytanie metod=B1 <!--#echo var=3D"REDIRECT_REQUEST_METHOD" -->
> +    wymaga prawid=B3owgo nag=B3=F3wka <code>Content-Length</code>.

I would rather use: "Zapytanie u=BFywaj=B1ce metody <!--#echo [...] -->"

[...]
> Index: error/HTTP_NOT_FOUND.html.var
> =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
[...]
> +<!--#set var=3D"TITLE" value=3D"Nie ma!" -->

Ouch... "Zas=F3b nie odnaleziony" looks lika a far better transaction for
"Object not found".

> Index: error/HTTP_NOT_IMPLEMENTED.html.var
> =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
[...]
> +<!--#set var=3D"TITLE" value=3D"Nie da si=EA!"-->

Same here -- "Nie mo=BFna przetworzy=E6 zapytania"

[...]
> Index: error/HTTP_REQUEST_URI_TOO_LARGE.html.var
> =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
[...]
> +<!--#set var=3D"TITLE" value=3D"Za du=BFy URI!"-->

While "Za du=BFy" seems to be literally corect, I would prefer "Zbyt d=B3ug=
i",
just like you used in error body.

[...]
> Index: error/HTTP_VARIANT_ALSO_VARIES.html.var
> =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
[...]
> +<!--#set var=3D"TITLE" value=3D"Wariant sam jest zmienny!"-->

I would remove "sam" in favour of "tak=BFe", but this is not so important.


> Index: error/contact.html.var
> =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=
=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D
[...]
> +Je=B6li mo=BFe to by=E6 b=B3=B1d po stronie serwera, prosz=EA skontaktow=
a=E6 si=EA z<a=20
> +href=3D"mailto:<!--#echo encoding=3D"url" var=3D"SERVER_ADMIN" -->">
> +zarz=B1dc=B1 WWW</a>.

Few suggestions here:

s/mo=BFe to by=E6 b=B3=B1d/uwa=BFasz, =BFe to b=B3=B1d/
s/zarz=B1dc=B1 WWW/administratorem serwera/


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