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From Rodent of Unusual Size <Ken.C...@Golux.Com>
Subject Re: [PATCH] Typo fix
Date Thu, 21 Jun 2001 20:05:23 GMT
Yoshiki Hayashi wrote:
> 
> I think this is correct fix but I'm not really comfortable
> with my English. :-)  Could someone review this change?

Did not see any reply to this.  Some are good, some are not:

> -work. <EM>Filename</EM> is either and absolute path or relative to <A
> +work. <EM>Filename</EM> is either an absolute path or relative to <A

Good.

> -it must be the LoadModule directive requires the exact filename, no
> +the LoadModule directive requires the exact filename, no

Good.

> -How good a defense is it?  Well suppose that one of your machines serves
> +How good a defense is it?  We'll suppose that one of your machines serves

Not good.  "Well suppose" should be "Well, suppose".

>  encoding the 112-bit (32-bit IP address, 32 bit pid, 32 bit time stamp,
> -16 bit counter) quadruple using the alphabet <CODE>[A-Za-z0-9@-]</CODE>
> +16 bit counter quadruple) using the alphabet <CODE>[A-Za-z0-9@-]</CODE>

Not good.  The phrase is "112-bit quadruple" with an enclosed
parenthetical explanation.  The original text is correct.
-- 
#ken    P-)}

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