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Subject: svn commit: r1727548 - /httpd/site/trunk/content/index.mdtext
Date: Fri, 29 Jan 2016 11:47:41 -0000
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From: elukey@apache.org
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Author: elukey
Date: Fri Jan 29 11:47:40 2016
New Revision: 1727548

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1727548&view=rev
Log:
Addressed the latest comments for the index page. Bug 55841

Modified:
    httpd/site/trunk/content/index.mdtext

Modified: httpd/site/trunk/content/index.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/httpd/site/trunk/content/index.mdtext?rev=1727548&r1=1727547&r2=1727548&view=diff
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--- httpd/site/trunk/content/index.mdtext (original)
+++ httpd/site/trunk/content/index.mdtext Fri Jan 29 11:47:40 2016
@@ -19,12 +19,12 @@ Notice:    Licensed to the Apache Softwa
 # The Number One HTTP Server On The Internet
 The Apache HTTP Server Project is an effort to develop and maintain an
 open-source HTTP server for modern operating systems including UNIX and
-Windows NT. The goal of this project is to provide a secure, efficient and
+Windows. The goal of this project is to provide a secure, efficient and
 extensible server that provides HTTP services in sync with the current HTTP
 standards.
 
-The Apache HTTP Server ("httpd") was launched in 1995, has been the most popular web server on the Internet since
-April 1996, and celebrates its 20th birthday as a project this February.
+The Apache HTTP Server ("httpd") was launched in 1995 and it has been the most popular web server on the Internet since
+April 1996. It has celebrated its 20th birthday as a project in February 2015.
 
 The Apache HTTP Server is a project of [The Apache Software
 Foundation](http://www.apache.org/).
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ Foundation](http://www.apache.org/).
 The Apache Software Foundation and the Apache HTTP Server Project are
 pleased to
 [announce](http://www.apache.org/dist/httpd/Announcement2.4.html) the
-release of version 2.4.18 of the Apache HTTP Server ("httpd"). This version is our GA release of 
+release of version 2.4.18 of the Apache HTTP Server ("httpd"). This version is our GA (General Availability) release of 
 the new generation 2.4.x branch of Apache httpd and it is recommended over all previous releases.
  
 This version of Apache httpd is principally a security and bug fix release of the 2.4 stable branch,