nd          2003/07/05 19:15:01

  Modified:    docs/manual/mod Tag: APACHE_2_0_BRANCH mod_proxy.xml
  Log:
  backport Roy's grammar fixes
  
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  1.12.2.8  +8 -9      httpd-2.0/docs/manual/mod/mod_proxy.xml
  
  Index: mod_proxy.xml
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  RCS file: /home/cvs/httpd-2.0/docs/manual/mod/mod_proxy.xml,v
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  diff -u -r1.12.2.7 -r1.12.2.8
  --- mod_proxy.xml	5 May 2003 23:38:50 -0000	1.12.2.7
  +++ mod_proxy.xml	6 Jul 2003 02:15:01 -0000	1.12.2.8
  @@ -28,22 +28,21 @@
       major overhaul for Apache v2.0. The protocol support was upgraded to
       <code>HTTP/1.1</code>, and filter support was enabled.</p>
   
  -    <p>During the overhaul process the <module>mod_proxy</module> has been
  -    splitted into several module files. The accompanying modules distributed
  -    with the httpd are <module>mod_proxy_http</module>,
  +    <p>During the overhaul process, <module>mod_proxy</module> features
  +    have been split into several module files: <module>mod_proxy_http</module>,
       <module>mod_proxy_ftp</module> and <module>mod_proxy_connect</module>.
  -    Thus if you want to use one or more of the particular proxy functions you
  -    have to load <module>mod_proxy</module> <em>and</em> the appropriate
  +    Thus, if you want to use one or more of the particular proxy functions,
  +    load <module>mod_proxy</module> <em>and</em> the appropriate
       module(s) into the server (either statically or dynamically via the
       <directive module="mod_so">LoadModule</directive> directive).</p>
   
       <p>Please note that the <strong>caching</strong> function present in <module
       >mod_proxy</module> up to Apache v1.3.x has been <strong>removed</strong>
  -    from <module>mod_proxy</module> and will be incorporated into a new module,
  -    <module>mod_cache</module>. In other words: the Apache 2.0.x-Proxy doesn't 
  -    cache at all - all caching functionality has been moved into
  +    from <module>mod_proxy</module> and incorporated into a new module,
  +    <module>mod_cache</module>. In other words, the Apache 2.0.x proxy doesn't 
  +    cache - all caching functionality has been moved into
       <module>mod_cache</module>, which is capable of caching any content, not
  -    only content from proxy.</p>
  +    just content from the proxy.</p>
   
       <p>If you need to use SSL when contacting remote servers, have a look at the
       <code>SSLProxy*</code> directives in <module>mod_ssl</module>.</p>