Date: 16 Nov 1997 23:18:50 -0000
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From: jim@hyperreal.org
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jim         97/11/16 15:18:50

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  RCS file: /export/home/cvs/apachen/Announcement,v
  retrieving revision 1.4
  retrieving revision 1.5
  diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
  --- Announcement	1997/11/15 15:38:21	1.4
  +++ Announcement	1997/11/16 23:18:49	1.5
  @@ -6,16 +6,16 @@
   of Apache, the latest beta release of the Apache web server.
   
   Apache 1.3 offers numerous enhancements, improvements and performance
  -boosts over the 1.2 code base.  The most visible and noteworthy addition
  +boosts over the 1.2 code base. The most visible and noteworthy addition
   is the ability to run Apache under Windows 95 and NT (known as the
   ``Win32'' port). 
   
   Apache 1.3b3 under both Win32 and UNIX has undergone extensive testing,
  -and is much improved over the previous 1.3b2 release.  In particular, the
  -1.3b2 release for Win32 was considered a ``developers version.''  We feel
  +and is much improved over the previous 1.3b2 release. In particular, the
  +1.3b2 release for Win32 was considered a ``developer's version.''  We feel
   confident that the Win32 port is ready for a wider audience, and with that
   in mind, we are providing pre-compiled executables for the Win32 platform,
  -as well as a true Win32 environment Installer (InstallShield).  This is,
  +as well as a true Win32 environment Installer (InstallShield). This is,
   however, still a beta release and there are known issues that will be
   fixed before the final 1.3 release.
   
  @@ -26,12 +26,12 @@
   Apache has been the most popular web server on the Internet since April
   of 1996. The September 1997 WWW server site survey by Netcraft (see:
   http://www.netcraft.co.uk/Survey/) found that more web servers were
  -using Apache than any other software.  Apache and its derivatives are run
  +using Apache than any other software. Apache and its derivatives are run
   on over 49% of all web domains on the Internet.
   
   The Apache project has been organized in an attempt to answer some of
   the concerns regarding active development of a public domain HTTP server
  -for UNIX.  The goal of this project is to provide a secure, efficient and
  +for UNIX. The goal of this project is to provide a secure, efficient and
   extensible server which provides HTTP services in sync with the current
   HTTP standards.