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Subject DO NOT REPLY [Bug 37536] - Tutorial..
Date Wed, 16 Nov 2005 23:49:12 GMT
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nick@webthing.com changed:

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             Status|NEW                         |RESOLVED
         Resolution|                            |WONTFIX




------- Additional Comments From nick@webthing.com  2005-11-17 00:49 -------
Since you've filed it here, can I offer some brief criticisms here?  
  
You badly need an editor.  To begin at the beginning:- 
  
"The chroot() system call changes a processes notion of where the root of the  
filesystem is."  
 
I know what you mean, but that's gramatically nonsense. 
  
"This can be useful because it is possible to create directory heirarchy's  
that contain just the files a particular application needs to function."  
  
Same again.  The third sentence is the first not to grate painfully, though  
I'd add a comma after "In general" before questioning exactly what you're  
trying to say ("a common form of attack" != "in general").  
  
More seriously, I find the prose style challenging: the paragraphs are long  
but disjointed.  It's not helped by a layout that shoehorns it into a narrow  
column, with one third of the browser window on the left and another on the  
right occupied by irrelevant junk.  
  

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