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From dyozie <...@git.apache.org>
Subject [GitHub] incubator-hawq-docs pull request #80: HAWQ-1209 - hawq overview page
Date Thu, 05 Jan 2017 23:47:30 GMT
Github user dyozie commented on a diff in the pull request:

    https://github.com/apache/incubator-hawq-docs/pull/80#discussion_r94876821
  
    --- Diff: admin/RunningHAWQ.html.md.erb ---
    @@ -2,21 +2,36 @@
     title: Running a HAWQ Cluster
     ---
     
    -This section provides information for system administrators and database superusers responsible
for administering a HAWQ system.
    -
    -This guide provides information and instructions for configuring, maintaining and using
a HAWQ system. This guide is intended for system and database administrators responsible for
managing a HAWQ system.
    -
    -This guide assumes knowledge of Linux/UNIX system administration, database management
systems, database administration, and structured query language \(SQL\). Because HAWQ is based
on PostgreSQL 8.2.15, this guide assumes some familiarity with PostgreSQL. This guide calls
out similarities between HAWQ and PostgreSQL features throughout. It contains the topics:
    -
    -*  <a class="subnav" href="./ambari-admin.html">Managing HAWQ Using Ambari</a>
    -*  <a class="subnav" href="./startstop.html">Starting and Stopping HAWQ</a>
    -*  <a class="subnav" href="./ClusterExpansion.html">Expanding a Cluster</a>
    -*  <a class="subnav" href="./ClusterShrink.html">Removing a Node</a>
    -*  <a class="subnav" href="./BackingUpandRestoringHAWQDatabases.html">Backing Up
and Restoring HAWQ</a>
    -*  <a class="subnav" href="./HighAvailability.html">High Availability in HAWQ</a>
    -*  <a class="subnav" href="./MasterMirroring.html">Master Mirroring</a>
    -*  <a class="subnav" href="./HAWQFilespacesandHighAvailabilityEnabledHDFS.html">HAWQ
Filespaces and High Availability Enabled HDFS</a>
    -*  <a class="subnav" href="./FaultTolerance.html">Understanding the Fault Tolerance
Service</a>
    -*  <a class="subnav" href="./RecommendedMonitoringTasks.html">Recommended Monitoring
and Maintenance Tasks</a>
    -*  <a class="subnav" href="./maintain.html">Routine System Maintenance Tasks</a>
    -*  <a class="subnav" href="./monitor.html">Monitoring a HAWQ System</a>
    +Your HAWQ deployment environment is a collection of systems, processes, and data, and
the users that operate on these systems, processes, and data. This section provides information
for system administrators and database superusers responsible for administering a HAWQ deployment.
    +
    --- End diff --
    
    I think the lead sentence could use some cleanup - Your HAWQ deployment environment is
a collection of systems, processes, data, and the users that operate on those systems, processes,
and data.
    
    Also, I know the original text mentioned database superusers but that seems a bit weird
to call them out.  I think we could just stick with "system administrators" here.


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