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From dyozie <...@git.apache.org>
Subject [GitHub] incubator-hawq-docs pull request #22: Feature/start init
Date Wed, 19 Oct 2016 17:19:21 GMT
Github user dyozie commented on a diff in the pull request:

    https://github.com/apache/incubator-hawq-docs/pull/22#discussion_r84120777
  
    --- Diff: reference/cli/admin_utilities/hawqinit.html.md.erb ---
    @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ title: hawq init
     
     The `hawq init cluster` command initializes a HAWQ system and starts it.
     
    -The master or segment nodes can be individually initialized by using `hawq init master`
and `hawq init segment` commands, respectively. The `hawq init standby` command initializes
a standby master host for a HAWQ system.
    +The master or segment nodes can be individually initialized by using `hawq init master`
and `hawq init segment` commands, respectively.  Format options can also be specified at this
time. The `hawq init standby` command initializes a standby master host for a HAWQ system.
    --- End diff --
    
    Small edit: Change "initialized by using" to "initialized by using the"
    
    Also edit for passive voice here.



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