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From Alexei Fedotov <alexei.fedo...@gmail.com>
Subject Re: [site] One-sentence project description
Date Wed, 17 Nov 2010 13:18:34 GMT
Sian,
I like the latter. Is it ok to replace "consists of" by "is"?
Independence is assumed by Apache anyway.



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On Wed, Nov 17, 2010 at 4:08 PM, Sian January
<sianjanuary@googlemail.com> wrote:
> In order to meet the ASF requirements[1] for the Harmony website we
> need to have a one-sentence description of the project on our main web
> page, the downloads page and in the DOAP file.  It needs to describe
> the 'product' itself rather than the community or the project aims.
>
> I haven't spent ages thinking about this but how about something like:
>
> "Apache Harmony software is an independent implementation of Java SE 5
> and 6 with a modular runtime architecture."
>
> or to be more general:
>
> "Apache Harmony software consists of a modular Java runtime and class
> libraries."
>
> Any thoughts?
>
> Sian
>
>
>
>
> [1] http://www.apache.org/foundation/marks/pmcs#naming
>
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