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From "Nadya Morozova (JIRA)" <j...@apache.org>
Subject [jira] Commented: (HARMONY-2732) [doc]update eclipse movie
Date Tue, 19 Dec 2006 13:47:23 GMT
    [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/HARMONY-2732?page=comments#action_12459642 ] 
            
Nadya Morozova commented on HARMONY-2732:
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Hi Tony,
I've taken a look at the movie. I like it - a real step-by-step guide, with detailed steps
and all.
a couple of concerns:
- image quality. the new movie is of poorer quality. the image can be resized (unlike the
old one), but even on 1280X1024, the text appeared somewhat blurred. On smaller windows, nothing
could be read. do you think you can make the quality better for easier reading? 
- non-English characters. some dialogs (when opening new files?) showed non-English (Chinese?)
characters instead of the usual OK & Cancel buttons. Could you please double-check any
such occurrences? I suppose most of us will guess what the text on buttons stands for, but
still...
- wording on popups. Could you run a spell and grammar check on the text in yellow popups?
i only noticed one, but I didn't read attentively - "To be continue..(d)". additionally, some
popups speak in terms of "we", others as "I" vs "viewers". perhaps, we can stick to one  type
of narration - for example, always first person plural or always imperative. 

Again, I like the movie very much, let's do a bit more to make it perfect.
I'd be also waiting for Eclipse Movie. Reload :) 

Cheers, Nadya

> [doc]update eclipse movie
> -------------------------
>
>                 Key: HARMONY-2732
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/HARMONY-2732
>             Project: Harmony
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: Website/Documentation
>            Reporter: Tony Wu
>         Attachments: eclipse_movie_part1.swf
>
>
> first part of the eclipse movie. 

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