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Subject svn commit: r470017 - in /incubator/harmony/standard/site: docs/ xdocs/
Date Wed, 01 Nov 2006 17:58:09 GMT
Author: tellison
Date: Wed Nov  1 09:58:08 2006
New Revision: 470017

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?view=rev&rev=470017
Log:
Fixing typos, updating some outdated info, and adding a few more links.

Modified:
    incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/contribution_policy.html
    incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/contributors.html
    incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/downloads.html
    incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/get-involved.html
    incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/index.html
    incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/mailing.html
    incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/quickhelp_contributors.html
    incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/quickhelp_users.html
    incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/contribution_policy.xml
    incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/contributors.xml
    incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/downloads.xml
    incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/get-involved.xml
    incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/index.xml
    incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/mailing.xml
    incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/quickhelp_contributors.xml
    incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/quickhelp_users.xml

Modified: incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/contribution_policy.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/contribution_policy.html?view=diff&rev=470017&r1=470016&r2=470017
==============================================================================
--- incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/contribution_policy.html (original)
+++ incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/contribution_policy.html Wed Nov  1 09:58:08 2006
@@ -253,9 +253,10 @@
       <tr><td>
         
                                     <p>
-  We have divided our Subversion(SVN) repository into sections.  There are two 
-  main sections, the "standard" section, for which the standard Apache process 
-  applies (namely, the standard 
+  We have divided
+  <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/harmony/svn.html">our Subversion(SVN)
+  repository</a> into sections.  There are two main sections, the "standard"
+  section, for which the standard Apache process applies (namely, the standard 
   <a href="http://www.apache.org/licenses/icla.txt">Apache ICLA</a>
   is all that is required) and the "enhanced" section, which requires any
   committer to also be an Authorized Contributor.  Project code is in the
@@ -263,33 +264,36 @@
   the "standard" section.  For the purposes of illustration :
 </p>
                                                 <pre>
+enhanced
+    /admin
+    /classlib
+        /branches
+        /tags
+        /trunk
+           /modules
+              /applet
+              /awt
+              /beans
+              /...
+    /drlvm
+       /trunk
+           /build
+           /src
+           /vm
+    /jchevm
+    /tools
+    /...
 
-enhanced/JVM
-         /VM
-         /JIT
-         /GC
-         /...
-         /vm/lib interface
-enhanced/classlib
-            /tags
-            /branches
-            /trunk
-               /modules
-                  /applet
-                  /awt
-                  /beans
-                  /...
-               /...
-            /...
-standard/website and Documentation
-standard/Legal and administrative
-
+standard/
+    /sandbox
+    /site
+    /tools
+    /...
 </pre>
                                                 <p>
-  and we limit access within the enhanced part of the SVN 
-  using information provided by Authorized Contributors, as defined below.
-  Access to different parts of the repository is controlled by fine-grained
-  access control lists.
+  and we limit access within the enhanced part of the SVN by fine-grained
+  access control lists using information provided by Authorized Contributors,
+  as defined below.
 </p>
                                                 <p>
   We will be as liberal as possible - if your status as an Authorized Contributor

Modified: incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/contributors.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/contributors.html?view=diff&rev=470017&r1=470016&r2=470017
==============================================================================
--- incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/contributors.html (original)
+++ incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/contributors.html Wed Nov  1 09:58:08 2006
@@ -215,7 +215,8 @@
     If you would like to contribute to Harmony, please see the
     <a href="roadmap.html">roadmap</a> list to find areas where you can contribute.
     If there is nothing in there that suits your interest, but you still have
-    ideas, please feel free to suggest them on the mailing list.
+    ideas, please feel free to suggest them on
+    <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/harmony/mailing.html">the mailing list</a>.
 </p>
                                                 <table>
                         <tr>

Modified: incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/downloads.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/downloads.html?view=diff&rev=470017&r1=470016&r2=470017
==============================================================================
--- incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/downloads.html (original)
+++ incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/downloads.html Wed Nov  1 09:58:08 2006
@@ -222,8 +222,9 @@
 		building the class library code</a>.
 	</p>
                                                 <p>
-        However, if you dont't want to build it, we now offer snapshots of our JRE and HDK
-        for the Linux and Windows platforms.
+        However, if you don't want to build it, we now offer snapshots of our JRE and
+        <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/harmony/subcomponents/classlibrary/hdk.html">HDK</a>
+        for Linux and Windows x86-based platforms.
     </p>
                                                     
       <tr><td>

Modified: incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/get-involved.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/get-involved.html?view=diff&rev=470017&r1=470016&r2=470017
==============================================================================
--- incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/get-involved.html (original)
+++ incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/get-involved.html Wed Nov  1 09:58:08 2006
@@ -219,7 +219,7 @@
 </p>
                                                 <ul>
     <li>
-        Discussion occurs on the <a href="mailing.html">Harmony mailling lists</a>
+        Discussion occurs on the <a href="mailing.html">Harmony mailing lists</a>
     </li>
     <li id="irc-channel">
         Informal discussion also occurs on the
@@ -263,7 +263,7 @@
   Here are some basic guidelines and suggestions : 
   <ul>
   <li>
-    Once you have completed your changes, please  be sure 
+    Once you have completed your changes, please be sure 
     to test your changes very well. 
   </li>
   <li>
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@
   </li>
   <li>
    If you are offering a change to documentation or the website, 
-    please review the generated output and be sure that it is as you expect.
+   please review the generated output and be sure that it is as you expect.
   </li>
   <li>
     If you are offering a fix to a bug, please provide a testcase and 

Modified: incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/index.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/index.html?view=diff&rev=470017&r1=470016&r2=470017
==============================================================================
--- incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/index.html (original)
+++ incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/index.html Wed Nov  1 09:58:08 2006
@@ -236,12 +236,12 @@
 	    </li>
    </ul>
                                                 <p>
-       Also we aimed to support wide range of different platforms. The main criteria
-       if platform is supported or not is that there are people interesting in
-       running test on regular base, reporting build status, finding and fixing
-       bugs for that platform. 
-       <a href="http://wiki.apache.org/harmony/Platforms_to_Run_Harmony_Development_Kit_on">Here</a>
-        a list of platforms we currently intresting in.
+       We aim to support wide range of different platforms.  The main criteria
+       for whether a particular platform is supported or not is the involvement
+       of people in running tests on regular base, reporting build status, finding
+       and fixing bugs for that platform, and so on.  We have
+       <a href="http://wiki.apache.org/harmony/Platforms_to_Run_Harmony_Development_Kit_on">a
+       list of platforms</a> we are actively maintaining at the moment.
    </p>
                                                 <p>
        Please see the following "Getting Started" guides :
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@
                                                 <ul>
        <li>
            <a href="quickhelp_users.html">Getting Started for Harmony Users</a>
: for those
-           that wish to user our <a href="downloads.html">pre-built snapshots</a>
of Apache Harmony
+           that wish to use <a href="downloads.html">pre-built snapshots</a>
of Apache Harmony
        </li>
        <li>
            <a href="quickhelp_contributors.html">Getting Started for Harmony Contributors</a>
: for those
@@ -294,11 +294,13 @@
             <blockquote>
                 Our <a href="downloads.html">latest snapshots</a> have
                 lots of new fixes and features.  The VM has a new GC,
-                almost complete JVMTI, and now can co-exist with the IBM J9 VM in
+                almost complete JVMTI, and now can co-exist with
+                <a href="http://www.ibm.com/developerworks/java/jdk/harmony">the IBM
VME</a> in
                 the Harmony JRE structure.  Our classlibrary continues to grow with new
                 classes, notably CORBA, thanks to <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/yoko">
                 Apache Yoko</a>.  Also, the classlibrary includes many new fixes and
updates.
-                Choose the JRE to test your favorite acdpplications and give us feeback on
how
+                Choose the JRE to test your favorite applications, and
+                <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/harmony/mailing.html">give us
feedback</a> on how
                 we are doing, or use the HDK to enable faster development of the Harmony
classlibrary.
                 (<i>2006-09-28</i>)
             </blockquote>

Modified: incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/mailing.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/mailing.html?view=diff&rev=470017&r1=470016&r2=470017
==============================================================================
--- incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/mailing.html (original)
+++ incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/mailing.html Wed Nov  1 09:58:08 2006
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@
                                                                     <table  cellspacing="0"
cellpadding="2" width="100%">
       <tr><td>
         <h1>
-          <a name="Apache Harmony Mailling Lists">Apache Harmony Mailling Lists</a>
+          <a name="Apache Harmony Mailing Lists">Apache Harmony Mailing Lists</a>
         </h1>
       </td></tr>
       <tr><td>
@@ -247,7 +247,8 @@
 <li>
 Under no circumstances will any committer accept code for inclusion in our SVN 
 repository contributed on the mailing list unless
-it is from an Authorized Contributor, as defined <a href="">here</a>.
+it is from an
+<a href="http://incubator.apache.org/harmony/contribution_policy.html">Authorized Contributor</a>.
 </li>
 </ul>
 </blockquote>
@@ -263,8 +264,7 @@
       <tr><td>
         
                                     <p>The developer mailing list is used by the developers
to discuss
-plans, make decisions, vote on technical issues, etc.  It also gets
-change notices whenever issues are added to or updated in JIRA.  This
+plans, make decisions, vote on technical issues, etc.  This
 list has a higher volume, though some conversations take place on
     <a href="get-involved.html#irc-channel">IRC</a> as
 well.</p>
@@ -276,7 +276,7 @@
                                                 <p>
     Please note that at this time, we are keeping all developer traffic on one list,
     for classlibrary, virtual machine, doc, site and tool development, in order to
-    help build one contiguous community.  It is expected that at some point in the
+    help build one homogeneous community.  It is expected that at some point in the
     near future, we'll be splitting off into technical domains.
 </p>
                                                 <p>
@@ -342,7 +342,9 @@
         
                                     <p>This list receives notifications (with diffs)
every time a change is
 committed to the Harmony source tree.  It also receives change notices
-for changes to the Harmony Wiki.</p>
+for changes to the Harmony Wiki and whenever issues are added to or
+updated in our
+<a href="http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/HARMONY">JIRA issue tracking system</a>.</p>
                                                 <ul>
   <li><a href="mailto:harmony-commits-subscribe@incubator.apache.org">Subscribe</a>
to harmony-commits@incubator.apache.org</li>
   <li><a href="mailto:harmony-commits-unsubscribe@incubator.apache.org">Unsubscribe</a>
from harmony-commits@incubator.apache.org</li>

Modified: incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/quickhelp_contributors.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/quickhelp_contributors.html?view=diff&rev=470017&r1=470016&r2=470017
==============================================================================
--- incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/quickhelp_contributors.html (original)
+++ incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/quickhelp_contributors.html Wed Nov  1 09:58:08 2006
@@ -238,7 +238,7 @@
       </li>
     </ul>
                                                 <p>
-        The other prerequisites for building Harmony differ by the platform:
+        The other prerequisites for building Harmony differ by platform:
       </p>
                                                 <strong>
         Windows
@@ -452,8 +452,8 @@
             class library, the Java and the native code for your platform. 
             To run the test suite, you need a virtual machine. As the DRLVM is 
             yet incomplete, you can use the
-            <a href="http://www-128.ibm.com/developerworks/java/jdk/harmony/index.html">
-            IBM J9 virtual machine</a> generously made available for the project's
+            <a href="http://www.ibm.com/developerworks/java/jdk/harmony/index.html">
+            IBM virtual machine for Harmony</a> generously made available for the project's
         development needs by IBM under a non-open source, binary evaluation license.
         To install the VM, follow the instructions that accompany that VM.
        You can expand the class library code over the top of the Harmony directory (so that
the 'jdk'
@@ -618,7 +618,7 @@
         
                                     <p>
             Developers refer to one of the two ways of using code. Class 
-            library developers install the IBM J9 VM in the 
+            library developers install the IBM VME for Harmony in the 
             <code>working_classlib/deploy/jdk/jre</code>, so they can use 
             it as a well-known VM for unit testing. To work with the class 
             library, refer to the 

Modified: incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/quickhelp_users.html
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/quickhelp_users.html?view=diff&rev=470017&r1=470016&r2=470017
==============================================================================
--- incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/quickhelp_users.html (original)
+++ incubator/harmony/standard/site/docs/quickhelp_users.html Wed Nov  1 09:58:08 2006
@@ -212,13 +212,13 @@
       </td></tr>
       <tr><td>
                                     <p>
-          The current document provides basic instructions for users that
+          The current document provides basic instructions for people that
           wish to use Apache Harmony for running their Java programs. The
           steps described below neither require development tools nor
-          necessitate compilation source code.
+          necessitate compiling source code.
         </p>
                                                 <p>
-      For more information on how to get configured to build and
+      For more information on how to get you machine configured to build and
       work with the Apache Harmony source code, refer to 
       <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/harmony/quickhelp_contributors.html">
         Getting Started For Contributors

Modified: incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/contribution_policy.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/contribution_policy.xml?view=diff&rev=470017&r1=470016&r2=470017
==============================================================================
--- incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/contribution_policy.xml (original)
+++ incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/contribution_policy.xml Wed Nov  1 09:58:08 2006
@@ -68,9 +68,10 @@
 <subsection name="Division of Repository">
 
 <p>
-  We have divided our Subversion(SVN) repository into sections.  There are two 
-  main sections, the "standard" section, for which the standard Apache process 
-  applies (namely, the standard 
+  We have divided
+  <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/harmony/svn.html">our Subversion(SVN)
+  repository</a> into sections.  There are two main sections, the "standard"
+  section, for which the standard Apache process applies (namely, the standard 
   <a href="http://www.apache.org/licenses/icla.txt">Apache ICLA</a>
   is all that is required) and the "enhanced" section, which requires any
   committer to also be an Authorized Contributor.  Project code is in the
@@ -79,34 +80,37 @@
 </p>
 
 <pre>
+enhanced
+    /admin
+    /classlib
+        /branches
+        /tags
+        /trunk
+           /modules
+              /applet
+              /awt
+              /beans
+              /...
+    /drlvm
+       /trunk
+           /build
+           /src
+           /vm
+    /jchevm
+    /tools
+    /...
 
-enhanced/JVM
-         /VM
-         /JIT
-         /GC
-         /...
-         /vm/lib interface
-enhanced/classlib
-            /tags
-            /branches
-            /trunk
-               /modules
-                  /applet
-                  /awt
-                  /beans
-                  /...
-               /...
-            /...
-standard/website and Documentation
-standard/Legal and administrative
-
+standard/
+    /sandbox
+    /site
+    /tools
+    /...
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-  and we limit access within the enhanced part of the SVN 
-  using information provided by Authorized Contributors, as defined below.
-  Access to different parts of the repository is controlled by fine-grained
-  access control lists.
+  and we limit access within the enhanced part of the SVN by fine-grained
+  access control lists using information provided by Authorized Contributors,
+  as defined below.
 </p>
 
 <p>

Modified: incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/contributors.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/contributors.xml?view=diff&rev=470017&r1=470016&r2=470017
==============================================================================
--- incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/contributors.xml (original)
+++ incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/contributors.xml Wed Nov  1 09:58:08 2006
@@ -15,7 +15,8 @@
     If you would like to contribute to Harmony, please see the
     <a href="roadmap.html">roadmap</a> list to find areas where you can contribute.
     If there is nothing in there that suits your interest, but you still have
-    ideas, please feel free to suggest them on the mailing list.
+    ideas, please feel free to suggest them on
+    <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/harmony/mailing.html">the mailing list</a>.
 </p>
 
 <table>

Modified: incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/downloads.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/downloads.xml?view=diff&rev=470017&r1=470016&r2=470017
==============================================================================
--- incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/downloads.xml (original)
+++ incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/downloads.xml Wed Nov  1 09:58:08 2006
@@ -22,8 +22,9 @@
 	</p>
 
     <p>
-        However, if you dont't want to build it, we now offer snapshots of our JRE and HDK
-        for the Linux and Windows platforms.
+        However, if you don't want to build it, we now offer snapshots of our JRE and
+        <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/harmony/subcomponents/classlibrary/hdk.html">HDK</a>
+        for Linux and Windows x86-based platforms.
     </p>
 
     <subsection name="Snapshot Builds">

Modified: incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/get-involved.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/get-involved.xml?view=diff&rev=470017&r1=470016&r2=470017
==============================================================================
--- incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/get-involved.xml (original)
+++ incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/get-involved.xml Wed Nov  1 09:58:08 2006
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 <ul>
     <li>
         Discussion occurs on the <a
-        href="mailing.html">Harmony mailling lists</a>
+        href="mailing.html">Harmony mailing lists</a>
     </li>
     <li id="irc-channel">
         Informal discussion also occurs on the
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
   Here are some basic guidelines and suggestions : 
   <ul>
   <li>
-    Once you have completed your changes, please  be sure 
+    Once you have completed your changes, please be sure 
     to test your changes very well. 
   </li>
   <li>
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
   </li>
   <li>
    If you are offering a change to documentation or the website, 
-    please review the generated output and be sure that it is as you expect.
+   please review the generated output and be sure that it is as you expect.
   </li>
   <li>
     If you are offering a fix to a bug, please provide a testcase and 

Modified: incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/index.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/index.xml?view=diff&rev=470017&r1=470016&r2=470017
==============================================================================
--- incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/index.xml (original)
+++ incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/index.xml Wed Nov  1 09:58:08 2006
@@ -55,12 +55,12 @@
    </ul>
 
    <p>
-       Also we aimed to support wide range of different platforms. The main criteria
-       if platform is supported or not is that there are people interesting in
-       running test on regular base, reporting build status, finding and fixing
-       bugs for that platform. 
-       <a href="http://wiki.apache.org/harmony/Platforms_to_Run_Harmony_Development_Kit_on">Here</a>
-        a list of platforms we currently intresting in.
+       We aim to support wide range of different platforms.  The main criteria
+       for whether a particular platform is supported or not is the involvement
+       of people in running tests on regular base, reporting build status, finding
+       and fixing bugs for that platform, and so on.  We have
+       <a href="http://wiki.apache.org/harmony/Platforms_to_Run_Harmony_Development_Kit_on">a
+       list of platforms</a> we are actively maintaining at the moment.
    </p>
 
    <p>
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
    <ul>
        <li>
            <a href="quickhelp_users.html">Getting Started for Harmony Users</a>
: for those
-           that wish to user our <a href="downloads.html">pre-built snapshots</a>
of Apache Harmony
+           that wish to use <a href="downloads.html">pre-built snapshots</a>
of Apache Harmony
        </li>
        <li>
            <a href="quickhelp_contributors.html">Getting Started for Harmony Contributors</a>
: for those
@@ -81,7 +81,6 @@
 
 <section name="Project Status">
 
-
     <p>
         How are we doing?  We're making steady progress : 
     </p>
@@ -102,11 +101,13 @@
             <blockquote>
                 Our <a href="downloads.html">latest snapshots</a> have
                 lots of new fixes and features.  The VM has a new GC,
-                almost complete JVMTI, and now can co-exist with the IBM J9 VM in
+                almost complete JVMTI, and now can co-exist with
+                <a href="http://www.ibm.com/developerworks/java/jdk/harmony">the IBM
VME</a> in
                 the Harmony JRE structure.  Our classlibrary continues to grow with new
                 classes, notably CORBA, thanks to <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/yoko">
                 Apache Yoko</a>.  Also, the classlibrary includes many new fixes and
updates.
-                Choose the JRE to test your favorite acdpplications and give us feeback on
how
+                Choose the JRE to test your favorite applications, and
+                <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/harmony/mailing.html">give us
feedback</a> on how
                 we are doing, or use the HDK to enable faster development of the Harmony
classlibrary.
                 (<i>2006-09-28</i>)
             </blockquote>

Modified: incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/mailing.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/mailing.xml?view=diff&rev=470017&r1=470016&r2=470017
==============================================================================
--- incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/mailing.xml (original)
+++ incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/mailing.xml Wed Nov  1 09:58:08 2006
@@ -1,7 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
 
 <!--
-
     Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one or more
     contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file distributed with
     this work for additional information regarding copyright ownership.
@@ -26,7 +25,7 @@
  </properties>
 
 <body>
-<section name="Apache Harmony Mailling Lists">
+<section name="Apache Harmony Mailing Lists">
 
 <p>
 Apache Harmony mailing lists operate under the following terms :
@@ -68,7 +67,8 @@
 <li>
 Under no circumstances will any committer accept code for inclusion in our SVN 
 repository contributed on the mailing list unless
-it is from an Authorized Contributor, as defined <a href="">here</a>.
+it is from an
+<a href="http://incubator.apache.org/harmony/contribution_policy.html">Authorized Contributor</a>.
 </li>
 </ul>
 </blockquote>
@@ -79,8 +79,7 @@
 <subsection name="Developer Mailing List">
 
 <p>The developer mailing list is used by the developers to discuss
-plans, make decisions, vote on technical issues, etc.  It also gets
-change notices whenever issues are added to or updated in JIRA.  This
+plans, make decisions, vote on technical issues, etc.  This
 list has a higher volume, though some conversations take place on
     <a href="get-involved.html#irc-channel">IRC</a> as
 well.</p>
@@ -93,7 +92,7 @@
 <p>
     Please note that at this time, we are keeping all developer traffic on one list,
     for classlibrary, virtual machine, doc, site and tool development, in order to
-    help build one contiguous community.  It is expected that at some point in the
+    help build one homogeneous community.  It is expected that at some point in the
     near future, we'll be splitting off into technical domains.
 </p>
 <p>
@@ -154,7 +153,9 @@
 
 <p>This list receives notifications (with diffs) every time a change is
 committed to the Harmony source tree.  It also receives change notices
-for changes to the Harmony Wiki.</p>
+for changes to the Harmony Wiki and whenever issues are added to or
+updated in our
+<a href="http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/HARMONY">JIRA issue tracking system</a>.</p>
 <ul>
   <li><a href="mailto:harmony-commits-subscribe@incubator.apache.org">Subscribe</a>
to harmony-commits@incubator.apache.org</li>
   <li><a href="mailto:harmony-commits-unsubscribe@incubator.apache.org">Unsubscribe</a>
from harmony-commits@incubator.apache.org</li>

Modified: incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/quickhelp_contributors.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/quickhelp_contributors.xml?view=diff&rev=470017&r1=470016&r2=470017
==============================================================================
--- incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/quickhelp_contributors.xml (original)
+++ incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/quickhelp_contributors.xml Wed Nov  1 09:58:08 2006
@@ -1,7 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
 
 <!--
-  
     Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one or more
     contributor license agreements.  See the NOTICE file distributed with
     this work for additional information regarding copyright ownership.
@@ -53,7 +52,7 @@
     </ul>
       
       <p>
-        The other prerequisites for building Harmony differ by the platform:
+        The other prerequisites for building Harmony differ by platform:
       </p>
       
       <strong>
@@ -267,8 +266,8 @@
             class library, the Java and the native code for your platform. 
             To run the test suite, you need a virtual machine. As the DRLVM is 
             yet incomplete, you can use the
-            <a href="http://www-128.ibm.com/developerworks/java/jdk/harmony/index.html">
-            IBM J9 virtual machine</a> generously made available for the project's
+            <a href="http://www.ibm.com/developerworks/java/jdk/harmony/index.html">
+            IBM virtual machine for Harmony</a> generously made available for the project's
         development needs by IBM under a non-open source, binary evaluation license.
         To install the VM, follow the instructions that accompany that VM.
        You can expand the class library code over the top of the Harmony directory (so that
the 'jdk'
@@ -443,7 +442,7 @@
 
         <p>
             Developers refer to one of the two ways of using code. Class 
-            library developers install the IBM J9 VM in the 
+            library developers install the IBM VME for Harmony in the 
             <code>working_classlib/deploy/jdk/jre</code>, so they can use 
             it as a well-known VM for unit testing. To work with the class 
             library, refer to the 

Modified: incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/quickhelp_users.xml
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/quickhelp_users.xml?view=diff&rev=470017&r1=470016&r2=470017
==============================================================================
--- incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/quickhelp_users.xml (original)
+++ incubator/harmony/standard/site/xdocs/quickhelp_users.xml Wed Nov  1 09:58:08 2006
@@ -1,7 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?>
 
 <!--
-
     Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one or more
     contributor license agreements. See the NOTICE file distributed with
     this work for additional information regarding copyright ownership.
@@ -30,13 +29,13 @@
 	<section name="Getting Started For Users">
 
         <p>
-          The current document provides basic instructions for users that
+          The current document provides basic instructions for people that
           wish to use Apache Harmony for running their Java programs. The
           steps described below neither require development tools nor
-          necessitate compilation source code.
+          necessitate compiling source code.
         </p>
     <p>
-      For more information on how to get configured to build and
+      For more information on how to get you machine configured to build and
       work with the Apache Harmony source code, refer to 
       <a href="http://incubator.apache.org/harmony/quickhelp_contributors.html">
         Getting Started For Contributors



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