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From "Daniel Templeton (JIRA)" <j...@apache.org>
Subject [jira] [Commented] (YARN-6742) Minor mistakes in "The YARN Service Registry" docs
Date Tue, 11 Jul 2017 20:30:00 GMT

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Daniel Templeton commented on YARN-6742:
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Thanks for the patch.  Overall a great set of language edits.  Here are my additional fixes:

* "merely meaning that the process are running" => "merely meaning that the processes are
running"
* "register a web URL and an IPC address. But it is not sufficient for our purposes since
it does not allow" => "register a web URL and an IPC address. It is not sufficient for
our purposes, however, as it does not allow"
* "to be registered —such as" => "to be registered—such as"
* "able to register certificates and other public security information" => "able to register
certificates, and other public security information"
* "There has no attempt to restrict read access" => "There will be no attempt to restrict
read access"
* "security restriction (this is why" => "security restriction. (This is why"
* "all other accounts, and anonymous access is read-only." => "all other accounts and anonymous
access are read-only."
* {quote}* The permissions are similarly restricted for `/users`, and `/services/`

* installations may extend or change these system accounts.{quote} => {quote}* The permissions
are similarly restricted for `/users`. `/services/`
installations may extend or change these system accounts.{quote}
* "add extra `digest:` ACL tokens" => "add extra `digest`: ACL tokens,"  <-- Note the
trailing comma.
* "The agents use two-way HTTPS authentication-—if the AM fails" => "The agents use two-way
HTTPS authentication. If the AM fails"

> Minor mistakes in "The YARN Service Registry" docs
> --------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: YARN-6742
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/YARN-6742
>             Project: Hadoop YARN
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: documentation
>    Affects Versions: 3.0.0-alpha3
>            Reporter: Yeliang Cang
>            Assignee: Yeliang Cang
>            Priority: Trivial
>         Attachments: YARN-6742-001.patch, YARN-6742-002.patch, YARN-6742-003.patch
>
>
> There are minor mistakes in The YARN Service Registry docs.



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