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From Jim Jagielski <...@jaguNET.com>
Subject Re: Press Release for Geronimo 2.0.1
Date Tue, 21 Aug 2007 13:29:56 GMT
Quick look:

On Aug 21, 2007, at 9:08 AM, Matt Hogstrom wrote:
>
> .... OpenJPA projects. Here is a list of some of these programming  
> enhancements:
>

"Here is a list..." sounds clunky... we will reword that.

>
>
> ... continued promotion of the ”Little G”  2.0.1 —a lightweight

Also sounds clunky: "of _the_ Little G"... I recommend
"of Little G" instead (drop the 'the'). Also, is "promotion"
the right word? How about "development" or "usage"...


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