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From Jeff Genender <jgenen...@apache.org>
Subject Re: DRAFT Press Release (taking this forward to the PRC on Monday unless there are significant changes ... keep 'em coming)
Date Sun, 12 Aug 2007 03:02:20 GMT
+1...looks good.

Matt Hogstrom wrote:
> This works for me.   Anyone else ?
> 
> On Aug 11, 2007, at 7:37 PM, Jarek Gawor wrote:
> 
>> Matt,
>>
>> A few comments:
>>
>> 1) I We should say Apache Axis2 instead of just Apache Axis.
>>
>> 2) I liked the original first paragraph because it announced Geronimo
>> as Java EE 5 server which is really the most important bit of this
>> release. Therefore, I think the press release should start with that
>> and not with the web services bits.
>>
>> Here's the text I propose:
>>
>> =================
>>
>> date/time/location—The Apache Software Foundation (ASF) announced
>> today the release of Apache Geronimo Version 2.0
>> (http://geronimo.apache.org). This release represents the latest open
>> source Java Enterprise Edition 5.0 application server from the Apache
>> Geronimo project, and continues the evolution of the Apache Geronimo
>> server by adding new features and capabilities to a fully compliant
>> and certified Java Enterprise Edition container suitable for
>> everything from a development environment to enterprise-level
>> deployments.
>>
>> The newly released Apache Geronimo 2.0 breaks new ground as the first
>> Open Source Application Server to provide two certified JAX-WS Web
>> Services implementations: Apache Axis2 and Apache CXF. It also
>> introduces other new features such as simplified development, improved
>> diagnostics and flexible assemblies. Simplified deployment is
>> achieved.... (insert rest of the text)
>>
> 
> 
> 

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