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From ches...@apache.org
Subject flink git commit: [hotfix] [docs] Polish grammar and tone for consistency and clarity
Date Tue, 10 Oct 2017 12:09:08 GMT
Repository: flink
Updated Branches:
  refs/heads/master 8c239ac33 -> 83b6ba704


[hotfix] [docs] Polish grammar and tone for consistency and clarity

This closes #4760.


Project: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/flink/repo
Commit: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/flink/commit/83b6ba70
Tree: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/flink/tree/83b6ba70
Diff: http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/flink/diff/83b6ba70

Branch: refs/heads/master
Commit: 83b6ba704b4a513a6c98b0fbde6b73dc2c898b7f
Parents: 8c239ac
Author: Chris Ward <chriswhward@gmail.com>
Authored: Mon Oct 2 15:20:50 2017 +0200
Committer: zentol <chesnay@apache.org>
Committed: Tue Oct 10 14:09:02 2017 +0200

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 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
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http://git-wip-us.apache.org/repos/asf/flink/blob/83b6ba70/docs/index.md
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diff --git a/docs/index.md b/docs/index.md
index 8ef87eb..1ba8f07 100644
--- a/docs/index.md
+++ b/docs/index.md
@@ -25,27 +25,26 @@ under the License.
 
 
 
-This documentation is for Apache Flink version {{ site.version_title }}. These pages have
been built at: {% build_time %}.
+This documentation is for Apache Flink version {{ site.version_title }}. These pages were
built at: {% build_time %}.
 
-Apache Flink is an open source platform for distributed stream and batch data processing.
Flink’s core is a streaming dataflow engine that provides data distribution, communication,
and fault tolerance for distributed computations over data streams. Flink also builds batch
processing on top of the streaming engine, overlaying native iteration support, managed memory,
and program optimization.
+Apache Flink is an open source platform for distributed stream and batch data processing.
Flink’s core is a streaming dataflow engine that provides data distribution, communication,
and fault tolerance for distributed computations over data streams. Flink builds batch processing
on top of the streaming engine, overlaying native iteration support, managed memory, and program
optimization.
 
 ## First Steps
 
-- **Concepts**: Start with the basic concepts of Flink's [Dataflow Programming Model](concepts/programming-model.html)
and [Distributed Runtime Environment](concepts/runtime.html). This will help you to fully
understand the other parts of the documentation, including the setup and programming guides.
It is highly recommended to read these sections first.
+- **Concepts**: Start with the basic concepts of Flink's [Dataflow Programming Model](concepts/programming-model.html)
and [Distributed Runtime Environment](concepts/runtime.html). This will help you understand
other parts of the documentation, including the setup and programming guides. We recommended
you read these sections first.
 
 - **Quickstarts**: [Run an example program](quickstart/setup_quickstart.html) on your local
machine or [study some examples](examples/index.html).
 
-- **Programming Guides**: You can check out our guides about [basic API concepts](dev/api_concepts.html)
and the [DataStream API](dev/datastream_api.html) or [DataSet API](dev/batch/index.html) to
learn how to write your first Flink programs.
+- **Programming Guides**: You can read our guides about [basic API concepts](dev/api_concepts.html)
and the [DataStream API](dev/datastream_api.html) or the [DataSet API](dev/batch/index.html)
to learn how to write your first Flink programs.
 
 ## Deployment
 
-Before putting your Flink job into production, be sure to read the [Production Readiness
Checklist](ops/production_ready.html).
+Before putting your Flink job into production, read the [Production Readiness Checklist](ops/production_ready.html).
 
 ## Migration Guide
 
-For users of earlier versions of Apache Flink we recommend the [API migration guide](dev/migration.html).
-While all parts of the API that were marked as public and stable are still supported (the
public API is backwards compatible), we suggest migrating applications to the
-newer interfaces where applicable.
+For users of earlier versions of Apache Flink, we recommend the [API migration guide](dev/migration.html).
+While all parts of the API that were marked as public and stable are still supported (the
public API is backwards compatible), we suggest migrating applications to the newer interfaces
where applicable.
 
 For users that plan to upgrade a Flink system in production, we recommend reading the guide
on [upgrading Apache Flink](ops/upgrading.html).
 
@@ -55,5 +54,4 @@ For users that plan to upgrade a Flink system in production, we recommend
readin
 
 - **Training**: The [training materials](http://training.data-artisans.com/) from data Artisans
include slides, exercises, and sample solutions.
 
-- **Blogs**: The [Apache Flink](https://flink.apache.org/blog/) and [data Artisans](https://data-artisans.com/blog/)
blogs publish frequent,
-in-depth technical articles about Flink.
+- **Blogs**: The [Apache Flink](https://flink.apache.org/blog/) and [data Artisans](https://data-artisans.com/blog/)
blogs publish frequent, in-depth technical articles about Flink.


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