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From "Clement Escoffier (JIRA)" <j...@apache.org>
Subject [jira] Resolved: (FELIX-2814) Spelling Mistake
Date Tue, 01 Feb 2011 18:16:28 GMT

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Clement Escoffier resolved FELIX-2814.
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    Resolution: Fixed
      Assignee: Clement Escoffier

Richard has fixed the issues. It will be updated during the next sync.

Thanks !

Clement

> Spelling Mistake
> ----------------
>
>                 Key: FELIX-2814
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/FELIX-2814
>             Project: Felix
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: Felix Commons
>            Reporter: Andriyko
>            Assignee: Clement Escoffier
>              Labels: documentaion, felix,, osgi,
>
> Please excuse my spelling bug-reports, but it really bothers me to read this.
> On the documentation page:
> http://felix.apache.org/site/providing-osgi-services.html#ProvidingOSGiservices-Instancereconfiguration
> Under "Service Publication" section, first paragraph:
> 1. "The provided service handler manages the service publication and providing". I think
"providing" is not a correct word to use here.
> 2.  "For each declared <provides/>, the handler register a service.". And it should
be "registers".
> 3. "As the @Provides annotation can be used only once, only on service is registered
(but publishing all interfaces)." - There are two mistakes here: first, change "on" to "one",
second - "but publishing all interfaces" I think should be changed to "but all interfaces
are published".
> In the second paragraph, last sentence:
> 1. "However it is possible to set exposed specifications with the specifications attribute
to avoid to expose all collected interfaces". I think "to avoid to expose all" should be changed
to "to avoid exposing all...". Also - this sentence is very confusing in general - is it possible
to simplify it?
> Furthermore, following the code sample after this paragraph, the three change notices
(blue boxes) are not left-aligned. I don't know if it is like that intentionally or not.

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