Return-Path: Delivered-To: apmail-db-jdo-dev-archive@www.apache.org Received: (qmail 43661 invoked from network); 3 Oct 2007 17:13:14 -0000 Received: from hermes.apache.org (HELO mail.apache.org) (140.211.11.2) by minotaur.apache.org with SMTP; 3 Oct 2007 17:13:14 -0000 Received: (qmail 64587 invoked by uid 500); 3 Oct 2007 17:12:56 -0000 Mailing-List: contact jdo-dev-help@db.apache.org; run by ezmlm Precedence: bulk List-Help: List-Unsubscribe: List-Post: List-Id: Reply-To: jdo-dev@db.apache.org Delivered-To: mailing list jdo-dev@db.apache.org Received: (qmail 64570 invoked by uid 99); 3 Oct 2007 17:12:56 -0000 Received: from athena.apache.org (HELO athena.apache.org) (140.211.11.136) by apache.org (qpsmtpd/0.29) with ESMTP; Wed, 03 Oct 2007 10:12:56 -0700 X-ASF-Spam-Status: No, hits=-0.0 required=10.0 tests=SPF_PASS X-Spam-Check-By: apache.org Received-SPF: pass (athena.apache.org: domain of cbeams@gmail.com designates 209.85.146.179 as permitted sender) Received: from [209.85.146.179] (HELO wa-out-1112.google.com) (209.85.146.179) by apache.org (qpsmtpd/0.29) with ESMTP; Wed, 03 Oct 2007 17:12:57 +0000 Received: by wa-out-1112.google.com with SMTP id m38so6230617waf for ; Wed, 03 Oct 2007 10:12:36 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:mime-version:content-transfer-encoding:message-id:content-type:to:from:subject:date:x-mailer; bh=QiPm9bxlSHZ61FZuziOMqNUxgvK59o8nGGvuhNMoL10=; b=dw32l17H0sKwwMwfNHy2UgJFUpo8WlCwH+tBom4oaaR/ZuJRXX8Qqgu+VHh7EJy1c+HSItAZTneQEiV8RGoF8Q1dJ8K+Zxa0VR9fVY5PexCpGADswf38C5xwOREct/N4gtiCgn/9WarczzraVMiRlIn0XK/9la7DpWB2g6n7gaQ= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=received:mime-version:content-transfer-encoding:message-id:content-type:to:from:subject:date:x-mailer; b=gC8qEAqbBElCIMrTCAhLaL1ZKjPdF4boYwJVlvVgUQfAPZCU6/fVpsEQJi90oIDdl8FFB1pvlG0i0etZYUGVVNRsaErUu/xW9fr6xN4qSlfySE8YieV745mXDfRehqsiC0SiTjDPERNaeB8Ql52WT5uScJh/AKqvBtHVtpn/1/s= Received: by 10.114.209.1 with SMTP id h1mr494033wag.1191431556054; Wed, 03 Oct 2007 10:12:36 -0700 (PDT) Received: from ?10.5.15.101? ( [209.133.30.215]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id c1sm945069ana.2007.10.03.10.12.34 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=OTHER); Wed, 03 Oct 2007 10:12:34 -0700 (PDT) Mime-Version: 1.0 (Apple Message framework v752.3) Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Message-Id: Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII; delsp=yes; format=flowed To: jdo-dev@db.apache.org From: cbeams Subject: more feedback on new jdo docs Date: Wed, 3 Oct 2007 10:12:36 -0700 X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.752.3) X-Virus-Checked: Checked by ClamAV on apache.org From "There are 2 prevalent specification in the Java ORM world" Should read: "There are 2 prevalent specifications in the Java ORM world" (pluralized specifications) Technically, the '2' should actually be 'two' as well. Check Strunk and White on that one, but it's not as big a deal :-) - Chris Beams