Return-Path: Delivered-To: apmail-db-jdo-dev-archive@www.apache.org Received: (qmail 17628 invoked from network); 25 Sep 2007 18:05:44 -0000 Received: from hermes.apache.org (HELO mail.apache.org) (140.211.11.2) by minotaur.apache.org with SMTP; 25 Sep 2007 18:05:44 -0000 Received: (qmail 54115 invoked by uid 500); 25 Sep 2007 18:05:34 -0000 Mailing-List: contact jdo-dev-help@db.apache.org; run by ezmlm Precedence: bulk List-Help: List-Unsubscribe: List-Post: List-Id: Reply-To: jdo-dev@db.apache.org Delivered-To: mailing list jdo-dev@db.apache.org Received: (qmail 54104 invoked by uid 99); 25 Sep 2007 18:05:34 -0000 Received: from athena.apache.org (HELO athena.apache.org) (140.211.11.136) by apache.org (qpsmtpd/0.29) with ESMTP; Tue, 25 Sep 2007 11:05:34 -0700 X-ASF-Spam-Status: No, hits=-1.0 required=10.0 tests=RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW,SPF_PASS X-Spam-Check-By: apache.org Received-SPF: pass (athena.apache.org: local policy) Received: from [192.18.43.133] (HELO sca-es-mail-2.sun.com) (192.18.43.133) by apache.org (qpsmtpd/0.29) with ESMTP; Tue, 25 Sep 2007 18:05:33 +0000 Received: from fe-sfbay-10.sun.com ([192.18.43.129]) by sca-es-mail-2.sun.com (8.13.7+Sun/8.12.9) with ESMTP id l8PI5C4f007302 for ; Tue, 25 Sep 2007 11:05:12 -0700 (PDT) Received: from conversion-daemon.fe-sfbay-10.sun.com by fe-sfbay-10.sun.com (Sun Java System Messaging Server 6.2-8.04 (built Feb 28 2007)) id <0JOX00801RCAHT00@fe-sfbay-10.sun.com> (original mail from Craig.Russell@Sun.COM) for jdo-dev@db.apache.org; Tue, 25 Sep 2007 11:05:12 -0700 (PDT) Received: from [129.146.30.105] by fe-sfbay-10.sun.com (Sun Java System Messaging Server 6.2-8.04 (built Feb 28 2007)) with ESMTPSA id <0JOX00MX1RKNRC20@fe-sfbay-10.sun.com> for jdo-dev@db.apache.org; Tue, 25 Sep 2007 11:05:12 -0700 (PDT) Date: Tue, 25 Sep 2007 11:04:48 -0700 From: Craig L Russell Subject: Re: JDO 2.1 spec draft: minor language changes in 5.5.8, "Detached-clean" In-reply-to: <1011309E-6295-4237-8123-D5E47407491F@gmail.com> Sender: Craig.Russell@Sun.COM To: jdo-dev@db.apache.org Cc: JDO Expert Group Message-id: MIME-version: 1.0 X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.752.3) Content-type: multipart/signed; protocol="application/pkcs7-signature"; boundary=Apple-Mail-45--164589661; micalg=sha1 References: <1011309E-6295-4237-8123-D5E47407491F@gmail.com> X-Virus-Checked: Checked by ClamAV on apache.org --Apple-Mail-45--164589661 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII; delsp=yes; format=flowed Hi Chris, Fixed in draft dated 2007-9-28. Thanks, Craig On Sep 15, 2007, at 1:32 PM, cbeams wrote: > I'd suggest that in A5.5.8-1 > > A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their > persistence manager and have not been > modified are detached-clean.] Detach is done by one of three ways: > > The phrase "Detach is done by one of three ways" would read better > as "Detachment is done in one of three ways", as follows: > > A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their > persistence manager and have not been > modified are detached-clean.] Detachment is done in one of three ways: > > - Chris Craig Russell Architect, Sun Java Enterprise System http://java.sun.com/products/jdo 408 276-5638 mailto:Craig.Russell@sun.com P.S. A good JDO? 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