Return-Path: Delivered-To: apmail-db-jdo-dev-archive@www.apache.org Received: (qmail 42388 invoked from network); 25 Sep 2007 19:08:43 -0000 Received: from hermes.apache.org (HELO mail.apache.org) (140.211.11.2) by minotaur.apache.org with SMTP; 25 Sep 2007 19:08:43 -0000 Received: (qmail 96286 invoked by uid 500); 25 Sep 2007 19:08:33 -0000 Mailing-List: contact jdo-dev-help@db.apache.org; run by ezmlm Precedence: bulk List-Help: List-Unsubscribe: List-Post: List-Id: Reply-To: jdo-dev@db.apache.org Delivered-To: mailing list jdo-dev@db.apache.org Received: (qmail 96275 invoked by uid 99); 25 Sep 2007 19:08:33 -0000 Received: from athena.apache.org (HELO athena.apache.org) (140.211.11.136) by apache.org (qpsmtpd/0.29) with ESMTP; Tue, 25 Sep 2007 12:08:33 -0700 X-ASF-Spam-Status: No, hits=-0.0 required=10.0 tests=SPF_PASS X-Spam-Check-By: apache.org Received-SPF: pass (athena.apache.org: domain of cbeams@gmail.com designates 209.85.198.185 as permitted sender) Received: from [209.85.198.185] (HELO rv-out-0910.google.com) (209.85.198.185) by apache.org (qpsmtpd/0.29) with ESMTP; Tue, 25 Sep 2007 19:08:33 +0000 Received: by rv-out-0910.google.com with SMTP id b22so1651564rvf for ; Tue, 25 Sep 2007 12:08:13 -0700 (PDT) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=domainkey-signature:received:received:mime-version:in-reply-to:references:content-type:message-id:content-transfer-encoding:from:subject:date:to:x-mailer; bh=Au/DfjBa8u9S/yJEjDNk76fbjwJlxVhuJw3QNffm7G8=; b=tIt3vMZrbfWq0ZHAiOU3GnKUnIiWIhH1H0148pPFc/GASUeM/rzewZPR5WT/ZUz4pj5bp2k6chQXOpi6HlLj0iNmlIzHp4BZPQxQOLiuZJ/kbZnTUUuYw7MFZjDzgW1iiIzecj15Z2FhcXis+v8D5PJEeHdfQMySR2bNtOXQuCg= DomainKey-Signature: a=rsa-sha1; c=nofws; d=gmail.com; s=beta; h=received:mime-version:in-reply-to:references:content-type:message-id:content-transfer-encoding:from:subject:date:to:x-mailer; b=CPlOwtEJhDyiYotiQXHZl9ir8LBDHK6bDNiFIdXwousnn23XiwbfSBc8f6yK3KzRX8ipxWjnjUHQfrXqX1Cogia/h9fE4TXOtldfOWS01UUZ/AVOatBh1caj4qL8h611vq2Ctoj1rKLoeDpWBYpqSUyYpssh2akWJMU/ZRrWl/s= Received: by 10.141.210.5 with SMTP id m5mr2041815rvq.1190747293099; Tue, 25 Sep 2007 12:08:13 -0700 (PDT) Received: from ?192.168.2.18? ( [206.63.245.8]) by mx.google.com with ESMTPS id b34sm13073384rvf.2007.09.25.12.08.11 (version=TLSv1/SSLv3 cipher=OTHER); Tue, 25 Sep 2007 12:08:11 -0700 (PDT) Mime-Version: 1.0 (Apple Message framework v752.3) In-Reply-To: References: <1011309E-6295-4237-8123-D5E47407491F@gmail.com> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=US-ASCII; delsp=yes; format=flowed Message-Id: <9D34E3E1-DE15-4CF4-B23E-D9C816A0023F@gmail.com> Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit From: cbeams Subject: Re: JDO 2.1 spec draft: minor language changes in 5.5.8, "Detached-clean" Date: Tue, 25 Sep 2007 12:07:36 -0700 To: jdo-dev@db.apache.org X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.752.3) X-Virus-Checked: Checked by ClamAV on apache.org where are these new draft versions posted? - C On Sep 25, 2007, at 11:04 AM, Craig L Russell wrote: > Hi Chris, > > Fixed in draft dated 2007-9-28. > > Thanks, > > Craig > > On Sep 15, 2007, at 1:32 PM, cbeams wrote: > >> I'd suggest that in A5.5.8-1 >> >> A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their >> persistence manager and have not been >> modified are detached-clean.] Detach is done by one of three ways: >> >> The phrase "Detach is done by one of three ways" would read better >> as "Detachment is done in one of three ways", as follows: >> >> A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their >> persistence manager and have not been >> modified are detached-clean.] Detachment is done in one of three >> ways: >> >> - Chris > > Craig Russell > Architect, Sun Java Enterprise System http://java.sun.com/products/jdo > 408 276-5638 mailto:Craig.Russell@sun.com > P.S. A good JDO? O, Gasp! >