Hi Chris,

Fixed in draft dated 2007-9-28.

Thanks,

Craig

On Sep 15, 2007, at 1:32 PM, cbeams wrote:

> I'd suggest that in A5.5.8-1
>
> A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their  
> persistence manager and have not been
> modified are detached-clean.] Detach is done by one of three ways:
>
> The phrase "Detach is done by one of three ways" would read better  
> as "Detachment is done in one of three ways", as follows:
>
> A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their  
> persistence manager and have not been
> modified are detached-clean.] Detachment is done in one of three ways:
>
> - Chris

Craig Russell
Architect, Sun Java Enterprise System http://java.sun.com/products/jdo
408 276-5638 mailto:Craig.Russell@sun.com
P.S. A good JDO? O, Gasp!