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From cbeams <cbe...@gmail.com>
Subject JDO 2.1 spec draft: minor language changes in 5.5.8, "Detached-clean"
Date Sat, 15 Sep 2007 20:32:21 GMT
I'd suggest that in A5.5.8-1

A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their  
persistence manager and have not been
modified are detached-clean.] Detach is done by one of three ways:

The phrase "Detach is done by one of three ways" would read better as  
"Detachment is done in one of three ways", as follows:

A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their  
persistence manager and have not been
modified are detached-clean.] Detachment is done in one of three ways:

- Chris
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