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From "Kim Haase (JIRA)" <j...@apache.org>
Subject [jira] Commented: (DERBY-1194) Clarify wording for ways to manage the Network Server in the Derby Server and Administration Guide
Date Fri, 20 Nov 2009 22:01:39 GMT

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Kim Haase commented on DERBY-1194:
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I think you've done a great job disentangling all the various suggestions, Bryan. I think
I looked at them a long time ago and couldn't think *what* to do.

Also, pointing to those figures in the tutorial works really well.

You don't really need the "Or" in the bullet list, and you don't need punctuation at the end
-- it can just be

   o As .... engine
   o As .... application



> Clarify wording for ways to manage the Network Server in the Derby Server and Administration
Guide
> --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-1194
>                 URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1194
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.1.3.1
>         Environment: DITA files
>            Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>            Assignee: Bryan Pendleton
>            Priority: Minor
>         Attachments: cadminconfig86869.diff, cadminconfig86869.diff.html, cadminconfig86869.html,
cadminconfig86869.html, cadminconfig86869_a.diff, cadminconfig86869_a.diff.html, docs.diff
>
>
> In this manual is written:
> Managing the Derby Network Server
> The Derby Network Server can run as a stand-alone server, with Derby as an embedded part
of the application.
> It can also be managed remotely from a web server by using a servlet interface. You can
manage the Network Server by using shell scripts, the command line, or the Network Server
API. See Managing the Derby Network Server remotely by using the servlet interface for information
about starting and shutting down the Network Server using the servlet interface.
> It seems to me that the sentences of this last paragraph are not in the correct order,
and the first  and second sentences should be swapped, becoming:
> You can manage the Network Server by using shell scripts, the command line, or the Network
Server API. It can also be managed remotely from a web server by using a servlet interface.
See Managing the Derby Network Server remotely by using the servlet interface for information
about starting and shutting down the Network Server using the servlet interface.

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