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From Myrna van Lunteren <m.v.lunte...@gmail.com>
Subject Re: sample text for the announcement
Date Fri, 21 Aug 2009 16:12:01 GMT
On Fri, Aug 21, 2009 at 6:16 AM, Rick Hillegas<Richard.Hillegas@sun.com> wrote:
> Please let me know how I can improve this. Thanks.
> -------------
> The Apache Derby project is pleased to announce a new bug-fix release of
> Derby,
> Apache Derby is a subproject of the Apache DB project. Derby is a pure Java
> relational database engine which conforms to the ISO/ANSI SQL and JDBC
> standards. Derby aims to be easy for developers and customers to use.
> Derby can be obtained from the Apache download site:
> http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html.
> Derby contains many bug fixes plus localizations for messages added
> in the previous feature release, Notably, fixes a query
> ordering regression introduced by If you installed,
> please upgrade to as soon as possible.

Looks fine to me.
Or perhaps you can say (instead of "Notably...by"):
" replaces which contained a query ordering regression."


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