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Date: Mon, 4 Dec 2006 10:26:22 -0800 (PST)
From: "Laura Stewart (JIRA)" <jira@apache.org>
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Subject: [jira] Commented: (DERBY-2125) Getting Started with Derby -
 Installing Derby
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    [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125?page=comments#action_12455378 ] 
            
Laura Stewart commented on DERBY-2125:
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I'll commit this as soon as I figure out how to :-)


> Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
> ---------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-2125
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>         Environment: DITA sourced documentation
>            Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>         Assigned To: Kim Haase
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: 10.0.2.2
>
>         Attachments: cgsinstallingderby.diff, cgsinstallingderby.diff.html, cgsinstallingderby.html, DERBY-2125.diff, DERBY-2125.html
>
>
> In this page is written:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions. You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development."
> but I think the correct could be:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads page provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions. To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."
> Because:
> 1) This downloads page DOESN'T "provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions", it "provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and source distributions". I couldn't find "prerelease snapshots".
> 2) The sentence "You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development." is not correct, there is a link to the source code, so I think this sentence could be "To find information on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."

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