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Subject: [jira] Commented: (DERBY-1972) Working With Derby needs some
 formatting fixes and other minor cleanup
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    [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1972?page=comments#action_12447572 ] 
            
Kim Haase commented on DERBY-1972:
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Thanks, Laura. Actually I have since realized that I failed to observe the doc conventions outlined in the Getting Started book for some things. I will probably need to fix that.

> Working With Derby needs some formatting fixes and other minor cleanup
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-1972
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1972
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>            Reporter: Kim Haase
>         Assigned To: Kim Haase
>            Priority: Minor
>         Attachments: DERBY-1747.diff, DERBY-1972.zip
>
>
> The Working With Derby book uses DITA tags in ways that are not always consistent with the usage in other books and that lead to some problems in the processed output. Some examples are the use of the <varname> tag in inappropriate places and the use of formatting tags within <codeblock> tags.
> There are also a few minor punctuation and syntax issues worth fixing.

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