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From "Laura Stewart" <scotsmat...@gmail.com>
Subject Re: Working with Derby description on the Derby Docs Web page
Date Tue, 07 Nov 2006 21:28:02 GMT
Thanks Stan.  That was my impression too.  The current description
doesn't give the user any idea that there are hands on activites to
learn Derby.

I'll make the change as soon as I can.
Laura

On 11/7/06, Stanley Bradbury <Stan.Bradbury@gmail.com> wrote:
> Laura Stewart wrote:
> > The following is the description of the Working with Derby manual that
> > appears on the Derby Documentation Web page:
> > http://db.apache.org/derby/manuals/index.html
> >
> > Is this description complete/accurate?
> >
> > "Demonstrates how to use Derby in embedded and client-server
> > configurations."
> >
> Hi Laura -
> This is the short-and-sweet of it, accurate and brief.  I think the
> description would be better if it contained a reference to the hands-on
> nature of the document but this is a minor nit.  If you plan to update
> the page would you consider adding to the statement so it reads
> something like:
>
> "Activities that demonstrate how to use Derby in embedded and
> client-server configurations."
>
> Thanks for checking
>
>


-- 
Laura Stewart

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