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From "Kim Haase (JIRA)" <j...@apache.org>
Subject [jira] Updated: (DERBY-2125) Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
Date Wed, 29 Nov 2006 16:06:22 GMT
     [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125?page=all ]

Kim Haase updated DERBY-2125:
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    Attachment: DERBY-2125.diff
                DERBY-2125.html

Thanks very much for catching this error. I would call it a bug rather than an improvement!
I've made a few changes, mainly to fix the syntax and use parallel structure. I also made
the two href links external so that in the HTML pages version, the link opens in a new window
instead of in the same frame as the topic.

The updated diffs file is DERBY-2125.diff, and the new HTML file is DERBY-2125.html.

> Getting Started with Derby - Installing Derby
> ---------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-2125
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-2125
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>         Environment: DITA sourced documentation
>            Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>         Assigned To: Kim Haase
>            Priority: Minor
>             Fix For: 10.0.2.2
>
>         Attachments: cgsinstallingderby.diff, cgsinstallingderby.diff.html, cgsinstallingderby.html,
DERBY-2125.diff, DERBY-2125.html
>
>
> In this page is written:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads
page provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease snapshots as well as stable-version
binary distributions. You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version
control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development."
> but I think the correct could be:
> "Navigate your Web browser to http://db.apache.org/derby/derby_downloads.html. This downloads
page provides links to several distributions of Derby, including the latest official release
and previous official releases binary and source distributions. To find information on how
to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some specific
branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."
> Because:
> 1) This downloads page DOESN'T "provides several distributions of Derby, including prerelease
snapshots as well as stable-version binary distributions", it "provides links to several distributions
of Derby, including the latest official release and previous official releases binary and
source distributions". I couldn't find "prerelease snapshots".
> 2) The sentence "You will also find information on how to use the Subversion version
control system to access the Derby source code that is currently in development." is not correct,
there is a link to the source code, so I think this sentence could be "To find information
on how to use the Subversion version control system to access the Derby source code of some
specific branch or the development trunk, please see the page http://db.apache.org/derby/dev/derby_source.html."

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