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From: "Kim Haase (JIRA)" <derby-dev@db.apache.org>
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Subject: [jira] Commented: (DERBY-1948) 10.2 'Working with Derby' manual
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    [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1948?page=comments#action_12441509 ] 
            
Kim Haase commented on DERBY-1948:
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In addition to the corrections listed above (thanks to Micky for catching them!), I'm adding the following technical corrections.

twwdactivity1.dita:
 - change output 10.2.1.0 to 10.2.1.6 
 - Build is 452058

twwdactivity2.dita:
 - command output is not "Server is ready to accept connections on port 1527." but
 
   Apache Derby Network Server - 10.2.1.6 - (452058) started and ready to 
   accept connections on port 1527 at 2006-09-22 00:08:30.049 GMT
 
   I edited the timestamps to correlate approximately with those in the output examples.

 - shutdown command also different:
 
   Apache Derby Network Server - 10.2.1.6 - (452058) shutdown 
   at 2006-09-22 00:16:30.049 GMT
 
 - both messages later in file as well

rwwdactivity3.dita:
 - changed "java program" to "Java program" (2nd paragraph)
 - changed "SQLException method" to "SQLExceptionPrint method" near end
 - changed "JAVA" to "Java" at end

twwdactivity4.dita:
 - This activity leaves the Network Server running. Added a step to shut it down.

Will attach a diffs file that includes all these changes.

> 10.2 'Working with Derby' manual errors.
> ----------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-1948
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1948
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Bug
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.1.6
>         Environment: Under Fedora core 5
>            Reporter: Micky Connor
>         Assigned To: Kim Haase
>            Priority: Trivial
>
> Going through the 10.2 'Working with Derby' manual I think I
> have found several file path errors:
> --Under  Activity 1, the given path is
>     $DERBY_HOME/demo/toursdb/*.sql
>    but it should be
>     $DERBY_HOME/demo/programs/toursdb/*.sql
> --Similary, under Activity 3, in section 1, the given path is
>     $DERBY_HOME/demo/workingwithderby/*
>   but it should be
>     $DERBY_HOME/demo/programs/workingwithderby/*
> --Finally under Activity 4, section 3, the CLASSPATH given for Windows refers to 'derbyclient.jar',    but the UNIX version gives 'derby.jar'. The necessary driver only exists in 'derbyclient.jar'.

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