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From "A B (JIRA)" <derby-...@db.apache.org>
Subject [jira] Commented: (DERBY-1839) Doc Review Updates - Ref Manual
Date Tue, 26 Sep 2006 16:17:51 GMT
    [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1839?page=comments#action_12437879 ] 
            
A B commented on DERBY-1839:
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I reviewed the changes and they look great to me.  Only two very (very) minor suggestions
that would be nice:

-- 1--

rreffuncxmlquery:

Perhaps a slight rewording here: can we replace "has" with "have" and then change the last
part of the following the sentence?

 The result set for this query contains a row for only the rows in x_table that has a student
name of BC.

to be:

 The result set for this query contains a row for only the rows in x_table that have at least
one
 student whose name is BC.

-- 2 --

rreffuncxmlserialize:

Very slight rewording: maybe replace "contents" with "type" in the following sentence:

 There is no other way to convert the contents of a Derby XML value.

I think it's more accurate to say that we convert the type than it is to say that we convert
the contents...

I did notice that "data type" is still in the title of the rrefsqljtypexml.html  page even
though Jean had suggested that it be removed...but I'll let Jean comment on that if she's
so inclined :) 

Thanks Laura.

> Doc Review Updates - Ref Manual
> -------------------------------
>
>                 Key: DERBY-1839
>                 URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1839
>             Project: Derby
>          Issue Type: Improvement
>          Components: Documentation
>    Affects Versions: 10.2.2.0
>            Reporter: Laura Stewart
>         Assigned To: Laura Stewart
>             Fix For: 10.2.1.5, 10.3.0.0
>
>         Attachments: 1839_SQLstatements.diff, derby1839_SQLstatement_4.diff, derby1839_SQLstatements2.diff,
derby1839_SQLstatements2_html.zip, derby1839_SQLstatements3.diff, derby1839_SQLstatements3_html.zip,
derby1839_SQLstatements4_html.zip, derby1839_SQLstatements_html.zip, derby1839_TANCEILfunctions.diff,
derby1839_TANCEILfunctions_html.zip, derby1839_XML+functions_1.diff, derby1839_XML+functions_html1.zip
>
>
> This JIRA issue will be used to track all of the issues found in the 10.2 doc review
of the Reference Manual.

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