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From "Rick Hillegas (JIRA)" <derby-...@db.apache.org>
Subject [jira] Commented: (DERBY-1398) Miscellaneous copy-editting problems in the user guides
Date Mon, 12 Jun 2006 20:39:30 GMT
    [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1398?page=comments#action_12415907 ] 

Rick Hillegas commented on DERBY-1398:
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Committed at subversion revision 413739.

> Miscellaneous copy-editting problems in the user guides
> -------------------------------------------------------
>
>          Key: DERBY-1398
>          URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1398
>      Project: Derby
>         Type: Bug

>   Components: Documentation
>     Versions: 10.2.0.0
>     Reporter: Rick Hillegas
>     Assignee: Rick Hillegas
>      Fix For: 10.2.0.0
>  Attachments: bug1398_miscDoc_01.diff
>
> We should clean up these copy-editting problems:
> Admin Guide
>   Update Copyrights in all docs
>   Part One...About this guide and the Network Server documentation
>     "and and" -> "and"
>   Part One...Accessing the Network Server by using the network client driver
>     retrieveMessageText: Is this synchronization cruft:
> 	"...or when starting new units of work.
>   Part One...XA and the Network Server
>     We should say that the Derby Network Client is an example
> 	of a compliant DRDA client which you can use for distributed
> 	transactions.
>   Part One...Using the Derby ij tool with the Network Server
>     Do you really need the DRIVER command? Doesn't ij figure this
> 	out by itself?
>   Part One...Differences between the embedded client and the network client driver
>     These differences between network and embedded clients may need
> 	revisiting:
>     * There are no localized error messages for the network client.
>     * The network client driver fully materializes LOBS when retrieving a row.
>     * To use an encrypted user id and password, you need to have the IBM's Java Cryptography
Extension (JCE) Version 1.2.1 or later.
> Developer's Guide
>   Upgrade
>     Soft Upgrade
>       Soft upgrade allows you TO ...
>   Application development overview
>     last sentence "to serve AS..."
>   Derby server-side programming
>     Programming trigger actions
>       Examples of trigger actions
>         insert space between "the" and "flight_history"
>       Triggers and exceptions
>         "before to the statement" -> "before the statement"
> Getting Started Guide
>   Installing and working with Derby
>     Installing Derby
>       "This downloads page includes provides" ->
>       "This downloads page provides"
> Reference Guide
>   About this guide
>     How this guide is organized
>       "Information about Derby's implementation of the JDBC interface include"
> 	  ->
>       "Information about Derby's implementation of the JDBC interface, including"
>   JDBC Reference
>     java.sql.Blob and java.sql.Clob
>       I don't know what the following phrase means: "SQL extension over SQL"
>       Notes
>         "on the same column so could result"
>         ->
>         "on the same column could result"
> Working With Derby Guide
>   What next with Derby
>     "as your next step in leaning about"
>     ->
>     "as your next step in learning about"

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