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From "Rick Hillegas (JIRA)" <derby-...@db.apache.org>
Subject [jira] Created: (DERBY-1398) Miscellaneous copy-editting problems in the user guides
Date Mon, 12 Jun 2006 17:37:29 GMT
Miscellaneous copy-editting problems in the user guides
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         Key: DERBY-1398
         URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1398
     Project: Derby
        Type: Bug

  Components: Documentation  
    Versions: 10.2.0.0    
    Reporter: Rick Hillegas
     Fix For: 10.2.0.0


We should clean up these copy-editting problems:

Admin Guide

  Update Copyrights in all docs

  Part One...About this guide and the Network Server documentation

    "and and" -> "and"

  Part One...Accessing the Network Server by using the network client driver

    retrieveMessageText: Is this synchronization cruft:
	"...or when starting new units of work.

  Part One...XA and the Network Server

    We should say that the Derby Network Client is an example
	of a compliant DRDA client which you can use for distributed
	transactions.

  Part One...Using the Derby ij tool with the Network Server

    Do you really need the DRIVER command? Doesn't ij figure this
	out by itself?

  Part One...Differences between the embedded client and the network client driver

    These differences between network and embedded clients may need
	revisiting:

    * There are no localized error messages for the network client.
    * The network client driver fully materializes LOBS when retrieving a row.
    * To use an encrypted user id and password, you need to have the IBM's Java Cryptography
Extension (JCE) Version 1.2.1 or later.


Developer's Guide

  Upgrade
    Soft Upgrade
      Soft upgrade allows you TO ...

  Application development overview

    last sentence "to serve AS..."

  Derby server-side programming
    Programming trigger actions
      Examples of trigger actions

        insert space between "the" and "flight_history"

      Triggers and exceptions

        "before to the statement" -> "before the statement"



Getting Started Guide

  Installing and working with Derby
    Installing Derby

      "This downloads page includes provides" ->
      "This downloads page provides"

Reference Guide

  About this guide
    How this guide is organized

      "Information about Derby's implementation of the JDBC interface include"
	  ->
      "Information about Derby's implementation of the JDBC interface, including"

  JDBC Reference

    java.sql.Blob and java.sql.Clob

      I don't know what the following phrase means: "SQL extension over SQL"

      Notes

        "on the same column so could result"
        ->
        "on the same column could result"



Working With Derby Guide

  What next with Derby

    "as your next step in leaning about"
    ->
    "as your next step in learning about"




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