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Date: Wed, 12 Apr 2006 15:15:29 +0100 (BST)
From: "Halley Pacheco de Oliveira (JIRA)" <derby-dev@db.apache.org>
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Subject: [jira] Updated: (DERBY-1207) Derby Server and Administration Guide
 - Network Server security
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     [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1207?page=all ]

Halley Pacheco de Oliveira updated DERBY-1207:
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                cadminnetservsecurity.diff.html
                cadminnetservsecurity.html

The diff file, the diff file HTMLized and the new manual's page.

> Derby Server and Administration Guide - Network Server security
> ---------------------------------------------------------------
>
>          Key: DERBY-1207
>          URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1207
>      Project: Derby
>         Type: Bug

>   Components: Documentation
>     Versions: 10.1.2.3
>  Environment: DITA-sourced documentation
>     Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>     Priority: Minor
>      Fix For: 10.1.2.3
>  Attachments: cadminnetservsecurity.diff, cadminnetservsecurity.diff.html, cadminnetservsecurity.html
>
> In this page is written:
> 1) A server that is started with the 0.0.0.0 option will listen to client requests that originate from both localhost and from other machines on the network.
> -> 0.0.0.0 is the IP address, the option is -h, so in my opinion the sentence should be:
> A server that is started with the -h 0.0.0.0 option will listen to client requests that originate from both localhost and from other machines on the network.
> 2) In addition, administrative commands (for example, org.apache.derby.drda.NetworkServerControl shutdown) can run only on the host where the server was started, even if the server was started with the -h option.
> -> In this sentence it seems to me that "However" is better than "In addition", because what these sentence declares is an exception ("even if the server was started with the -h option") of what is declared in the previous sentence, and not a simple addition.
> 3) <p></p>
> -> There a two empty paragraphs in the source file that can be removed.

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