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From "John H. Embretsen (JIRA)" <derby-...@db.apache.org>
Subject [jira] Commented: (DERBY-1194) Derby Server and Administration Guide - Managing the Derby Network Server
Date Sun, 09 Apr 2006 09:12:36 GMT
    [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1194?page=comments#action_12373766 ] 

John H. Embretsen commented on DERBY-1194:
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I agree that the flow is much better when the two sentences are swapped.  :)

Also, I am not sure I completely understand what is meant by the first paragraph,
"The Derby Network Server can run as a stand-alone server, with Derby as an embedded part
of the application."

Is it that the Derby "engine" is an embedded part of the Network Server application? Or is
the purpose to say that is is possible to run the Network server either as a stand-alone server
or as an embedded server in the user's Java application? 
If the latter case is true, I think the sentence should be rephrased to something like this:
"The Derby Network Server can run as a stand-alone server, or as an embedded part of a Java
application."

What do others think?

Halley, in the future, it would be nice (easier for for reviewers) if you attached the html
output generated by the DITA toolkit, as explained here:
http://db.apache.org/derby/manuals/dita.html#Creating+output

In this particular case, you would find the generated html file in this location in your docs
repository:
out/adminguide/cadminconfig86869.html


> Derby Server and Administration Guide - Managing the Derby Network Server
> -------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>          Key: DERBY-1194
>          URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1194
>      Project: Derby
>         Type: Bug

>   Components: Documentation
>     Versions: 10.1.2.3
>  Environment: DITA files
>     Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
>     Priority: Minor
>      Fix For: 10.1.2.3
>  Attachments: cadminconfig86869.diff, cadminconfig86869.diff.html
>
> In this manual is written:
> Managing the Derby Network Server
> The Derby Network Server can run as a stand-alone server, with Derby as an embedded part
of the application.
> It can also be managed remotely from a web server by using a servlet interface. You can
manage the Network Server by using shell scripts, the command line, or the Network Server
API. See Managing the Derby Network Server remotely by using the servlet interface for information
about starting and shutting down the Network Server using the servlet interface.
> It seems to me that the sentences of this last paragraph are not in the correct order,
and the first  and second sentences should be swapped, becoming:
> You can manage the Network Server by using shell scripts, the command line, or the Network
Server API. It can also be managed remotely from a web server by using a servlet interface.
See Managing the Derby Network Server remotely by using the servlet interface for information
about starting and shutting down the Network Server using the servlet interface.

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