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From "Halley Pacheco de Oliveira (JIRA)" <derby-...@db.apache.org>
Subject [jira] Created: (DERBY-1207) Derby Server and Administration Guide - Network Server security
Date Wed, 12 Apr 2006 14:12:22 GMT
Derby Server and Administration Guide - Network Server security
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         Key: DERBY-1207
         URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-1207
     Project: Derby
        Type: Bug

  Components: Documentation  
    Versions: 10.1.2.3    
 Environment: DITA-sourced documentation
    Reporter: Halley Pacheco de Oliveira
    Priority: Minor
     Fix For: 10.1.2.3


In this page is written:

1) A server that is started with the 0.0.0.0 option will listen to client requests that originate
from both localhost and from other machines on the network.

-> 0.0.0.0 is the IP address, the option is -h, so in my opinion the sentence should be:

A server that is started with the -h 0.0.0.0 option will listen to client requests that originate
from both localhost and from other machines on the network.

2) In addition, administrative commands (for example, org.apache.derby.drda.NetworkServerControl
shutdown) can run only on the host where the server was started, even if the server was started
with the -h option.

-> In this sentence it seems to me that "However" is better than "In addition", because
what these sentence declares is an exception ("even if the server was started with the -h
option") of what is declared in the previous sentence, and not a simple addition.

3) <p></p>

-> There a two empty paragraphs in the source file that can be removed.


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