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From "Stan Bradbury (JIRA)" <derby-...@db.apache.org>
Subject [jira] Commented: (DERBY-380) Doc Review: Derby Developer's Guide
Date Fri, 24 Jun 2005 23:21:59 GMT
    [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-380?page=comments#action_12314439 ] 

Stan Bradbury commented on DERBY-380:
-------------------------------------

Stan's review of: %%% Developers Guide:  Using Derby as a J2EE resource manager  (partial)

>> These changes will make the section consistent with the J2EE section in the REFERENCE
Guide:::

 >> ON PAGE: http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/devguide/cdevresman19524.html
    **  Replace the following Into paragraph with the new Intro text below.  Old:
J2EE, or the Java 2 Platform, Enterprise Edition, is a standard for development of enterprise
applications; one example is Enterprise Java Beans (EJBs) with distributed capabilities.
   **  NEW:  J2EE, or the Java 2 Platform, Enterprise Edition, is a standard for development
of enterprise applications based on reusable components in a multi-tier environment.  In addition
to the features of the Java 2 Platform, Standard Edition (J2SE) J2EE adds support for Enterprise
Java Beans (EJBs), Java Server Pages (JSPs), Servlets, XML and many more.  The J2EE architecture
is used to bring together existing technologies and enterprise applications in a single, manageable
environment.
  [  NOTE: this intro is also included in the Refernece Manual  at: http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/ref/rrefjta37588.html
  ]

 >>ON PAGE: http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/devguide/cdevresman19524.html
  ** Remove this line - it is no longer true "Derby also supports the JTA API, which is not
a current J2EE requirement, but this functionality provides another piece of the same system.
"
  [  NOTE: this line is also included in the Refernece Manual  at: http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/ref/rrefjta37588.html
  ]



> Doc Review: Derby Developer's Guide
> -----------------------------------
>
>          Key: DERBY-380
>          URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-380
>      Project: Derby
>         Type: Improvement
>   Components: Documentation
>  Environment: all
>     Reporter: Jeff Levitt
>     Priority: Minor
>      Fix For: 10.1.1.0

>
> This issue tracks comments for the Derby Developer's Guide. The deadline for posting
comments isTuesday, June 28, noon Pacific time.
> Some guidelines to follow when posting comments to this issue are:
> - Try to make clear and concise comments about what you want changed whenever possible.
 Provide concrete comments that say "Please change <original> to <modified>" instead
of generic comments like "This section needs to be rewritten."
> - If you're reviewing the HTML Files copy, include the URL for the page in the review
comment. Obtain the URL like this:
>     * highlight the topic in the left frame
>     * right click
>     * choose "Properties"
>     * copy and paste the address in the pop up box.
> - If you're reviewing the PDF copy, in the review comment:
>     * Include the page number for the PDF, and indicate whether the number is the PDF
sheet number or the printed page number.
>     * Include the title of the section that the problem occurs in. If it's in a subsection,
try to include the hierarchy of titles.
> - Please don't review the HTML Book copy -- it'll be time consuming to match up that
copy with the underlying DITA source.

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