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From "Ramandeep Kaur (JIRA)" <derby-...@db.apache.org>
Subject [jira] Commented: (DERBY-380) Doc Review: Derby Developer's Guide
Date Mon, 27 Jun 2005 22:33:57 GMT
    [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-380?page=comments#action_12314558 ] 

Ramandeep Kaur commented on DERBY-380:
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I reviewed Derby Developers Guide ----> SQL Tips section on page 94 (printout page) and
here are the minor comments:

1. SQL tips starts at page 94 of the document, but table of content lists it starting at page
93.

2. At each page of this document, you might want to add guide name and main section name at
the footer of the page so that it is easier to see which guide and which section the page
belongs to.

Thanks, Raman

> Doc Review: Derby Developer's Guide
> -----------------------------------
>
>          Key: DERBY-380
>          URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-380
>      Project: Derby
>         Type: Improvement
>   Components: Documentation
>  Environment: all
>     Reporter: Jeff Levitt
>     Priority: Minor
>      Fix For: 10.1.1.0

>
> This issue tracks comments for the Derby Developer's Guide. The deadline for posting
comments isTuesday, June 28, noon Pacific time.
> Some guidelines to follow when posting comments to this issue are:
> - Try to make clear and concise comments about what you want changed whenever possible.
 Provide concrete comments that say "Please change <original> to <modified>" instead
of generic comments like "This section needs to be rewritten."
> - If you're reviewing the HTML Files copy, include the URL for the page in the review
comment. Obtain the URL like this:
>     * highlight the topic in the left frame
>     * right click
>     * choose "Properties"
>     * copy and paste the address in the pop up box.
> - If you're reviewing the PDF copy, in the review comment:
>     * Include the page number for the PDF, and indicate whether the number is the PDF
sheet number or the printed page number.
>     * Include the title of the section that the problem occurs in. If it's in a subsection,
try to include the hierarchy of titles.
> - Please don't review the HTML Book copy -- it'll be time consuming to match up that
copy with the underlying DITA source.

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