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From "Mamta A. Satoor (JIRA)" <derby-...@db.apache.org>
Subject [jira] Commented: (DERBY-382) Doc Review: Derby Reference Manual
Date Tue, 28 Jun 2005 07:48:57 GMT
    [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-382?page=comments#action_12314592 ] 

Mamta A. Satoor commented on DERBY-382:
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The format of the "DECLARE GLOBAL TEMPORARY TABLE" documentation page got changed from 10.0
documentation to 10.1 documentation. In my opinion, the 10.0 format at http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/10.0/manuals/reference/sqlj33.html#HDRDECLARETEMPTABLE
is much clearer than the 10.1 format at http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/ref/ref-single.html#rrefdeclaretemptable.


In 10.0, all the options of this sql are explained on one page along with the examples and
restrictions at the bottom of the page. In 10.1, only part of the syntax is explained on the
main page and for the rest of the syntax, there are links at the bottom of the page and this
makes it hard to understand this sql in its entirety. I think John English's recent post on
"Temporary tables not working???   " may have resulted from the fact that ON COMMIT DELETE
ROWS is not listed as default on the main page. 



> Doc Review: Derby Reference Manual
> ----------------------------------
>
>          Key: DERBY-382
>          URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-382
>      Project: Derby
>         Type: Improvement
>   Components: Documentation
>  Environment: all
>     Reporter: Jeff Levitt
>     Priority: Minor
>      Fix For: 10.1.1.0

>
> This issue tracks comments for the Derby Reference Manual. The deadline for posting comments
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