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From "Jeff Levitt (JIRA)" <derby-...@db.apache.org>
Subject [jira] Updated: (DERBY-379) Doc review (CLOSED TO FURTHER COMMENTS): Getting Started with Derby
Date Wed, 29 Jun 2005 07:54:58 GMT
     [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-379?page=all ]

Jeff Levitt updated DERBY-379:
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    Attachment: derby379.diff

Re-attaching patch...had some problems with the initial attachment process because of my connection...

> Doc review (CLOSED TO FURTHER COMMENTS):  Getting Started with Derby
> --------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>          Key: DERBY-379
>          URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-379
>      Project: Derby
>         Type: Improvement
>   Components: Documentation
>  Environment: all
>     Reporter: Jeff Levitt
>     Priority: Minor
>      Fix For: 10.1.1.0
>  Attachments: derby379.diff
>
> This issue tracks comments for the Getting Started with Derby manual. The deadline for
posting comments was Tuesday, June 28, noon Pacific time.
> PLEASE DO NOT POST ADDITIONAL COMMENTS TO THIS JIRA ISSUE.  If you have additional comments,
please open a JIRA issue for a fixin in a future release, as there is not enough time to incorporate
additional comments.
> Some guidelines to follow when posting comments to this issue are:
> - Try to make clear and concise comments about what you want changed whenever possible.
 Provide concrete comments that say "Please change <original> to <modified>" instead
of generic comments like "This section needs to be rewritten."
> - If you're reviewing the HTML Files copy, include the URL for the page in the review
comment. Obtain the URL like this:
>     * highlight the topic in the left frame
>     * right click
>     * choose "Properties"
>     * copy and paste the address in the pop up box.
> - If you're reviewing the PDF copy, in the review comment:
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sheet number or the printed page number.
>     * Include the title of the section that the problem occurs in. If it's in a subsection,
try to include the hierarchy of titles.
> - Please don't review the HTML Book copy -- it'll be time consuming to match up that
copy with the underlying DITA source.

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