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From "Stan Bradbury (JIRA)" <derby-...@db.apache.org>
Subject [jira] Commented: (DERBY-382) Doc Review: Derby Reference Manual
Date Fri, 24 Jun 2005 23:32:58 GMT
    [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-382?page=comments#action_12314441 ] 

Stan Bradbury commented on DERBY-382:
-------------------------------------

Stan's review of:  %%% Reference Guide:  J2EE Compliance section (HTML)

 >> ON PAGE: http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/ref/rrefjta16677.html
	The subject links (three bulleted links) appear 
	twice on the page >> remove one set

 >> ON PAGE:  http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/ref/rrefjta37588.html
  ** Replace the following Into paragraph with the new Intro text below.  Old:
J2EE, or the Java 2 Platform, Enterprise Edition, is a standard for development of enterprise
applications; one example is Enterprise Java Beans (EJBs) with distributed capabilities.
  ** NEW:  J2EE, or the Java 2 Platform, Enterprise Edition, is a standard for development
of enterprise applications based on reusable components in a multi-tier environment.  In addition
to the features of the Java 2 Platform, Standard Edition (J2SE) J2EE adds support for Enterprise
Java Beans (EJBs), Java Server Pages (JSPs), Servlets, XML and many more.  The J2EE architecture
is used to bring together existing technologies and enterprise applications in a single, manageable
environment.
  [  NOTE: this intro is also included in the Dev Guide at:
http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/devguide/cdevresman19524.html  ]

 >> ON PAGE:  http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/ref/rrefjta37588.html
 ** Remove this line - it is no longer true"
 (Derby also supports the JTA API, which is not a current J2EE requirement, but this functionality
provides another piece of the same system.) 
  [  NOTE: this line is also included in the Dev Guide at:
http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/devguide/cdevresman19524.html  ]

ON PAGE: http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/ref/rrefjta94396.html
  **  THREE (3) OCCURANCES of spurious characters (possibly the trademark character originally?):
 search for:  
  "Java™ 2 Platform"  >>>>> REPLACE WITH: "Java 2 Platform"

ON PAGE: http://incubator.apache.org/derby/docs/ref/rrefjta1003463.html
  **  Replace this NOTE with the supplied text:
OLD: Note: Derby's XADataSources can only be embedded. No remote (client/server) support is
provided.
  ** NEW: Note: Use the Network Client driver's XA DataSource interface (org.apache.derby.jdbc.ClientXADataSource)
when XA support is required in a remote (client/server) environment.


> Doc Review: Derby Reference Manual
> ----------------------------------
>
>          Key: DERBY-382
>          URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-382
>      Project: Derby
>         Type: Improvement
>   Components: Documentation
>  Environment: all
>     Reporter: Jeff Levitt
>     Priority: Minor
>      Fix For: 10.1.1.0

>
> This issue tracks comments for the Derby Reference Manual. The deadline for posting comments
is Tuesday, June 28, noon Pacific time.
> Some guidelines to follow when posting comments to this issue are:
> - Try to make clear and concise comments about what you want changed whenever possible.
 Provide concrete comments that say "Please change <original> to <modified>" instead
of generic comments like "This section needs to be rewritten."
> - If you're reviewing the HTML Files copy, include the URL for the page in the review
comment. Obtain the URL like this:
>     * highlight the topic in the left frame
>     * right click
>     * choose "Properties"
>     * copy and paste the address in the pop up box.
> - If you're reviewing the PDF copy, in the review comment:
>     * Include the page number for the PDF, and indicate whether the number is the PDF
sheet number or the printed page number.
>     * Include the title of the section that the problem occurs in. If it's in a subsection,
try to include the hierarchy of titles.
> - Please don't review the HTML Book copy -- it'll be time consuming to match up that
copy with the underlying DITA source.

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