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From "Jeff Levitt (JIRA)" <derby-...@db.apache.org>
Subject [jira] Updated: (DERBY-379) Doc review (CLOSED TO FURTHER COMMENTS): Getting Started with Derby
Date Tue, 28 Jun 2005 20:00:22 GMT
     [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-379?page=all ]

Jeff Levitt updated DERBY-379:
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        Summary: Doc review (CLOSED TO FURTHER COMMENTS):  Getting Started with Derby  (was:
Doc review:  Getting Started with Derby)
    Description: 
This issue tracks comments for the Getting Started with Derby manual. The deadline for posting
comments was Tuesday, June 28, noon Pacific time.

PLEASE DO NOT POST ADDITIONAL COMMENTS TO THIS JIRA ISSUE.  If you have additional comments,
please open a JIRA issue for a fixin in a future release, as there is not enough time to incorporate
additional comments.

Some guidelines to follow when posting comments to this issue are:

- Try to make clear and concise comments about what you want changed whenever possible.  Provide
concrete comments that say "Please change <original> to <modified>" instead of
generic comments like "This section needs to be rewritten."

- If you're reviewing the HTML Files copy, include the URL for the page in the review comment.
Obtain the URL like this:

    * highlight the topic in the left frame
    * right click
    * choose "Properties"
    * copy and paste the address in the pop up box.

- If you're reviewing the PDF copy, in the review comment:

    * Include the page number for the PDF, and indicate whether the number is the PDF sheet
number or the printed page number.
    * Include the title of the section that the problem occurs in. If it's in a subsection,
try to include the hierarchy of titles.

- Please don't review the HTML Book copy -- it'll be time consuming to match up that copy
with the underlying DITA source.


  was:
This issue tracks comments for the Getting Started with Derby manual. The deadline for posting
comments isTuesday, June 28, noon Pacific time.

Some guidelines to follow when posting comments to this issue are:

- Try to make clear and concise comments about what you want changed whenever possible.  Provide
concrete comments that say "Please change <original> to <modified>" instead of
generic comments like "This section needs to be rewritten."

- If you're reviewing the HTML Files copy, include the URL for the page in the review comment.
Obtain the URL like this:

    * highlight the topic in the left frame
    * right click
    * choose "Properties"
    * copy and paste the address in the pop up box.

- If you're reviewing the PDF copy, in the review comment:

    * Include the page number for the PDF, and indicate whether the number is the PDF sheet
number or the printed page number.
    * Include the title of the section that the problem occurs in. If it's in a subsection,
try to include the hierarchy of titles.

- Please don't review the HTML Book copy -- it'll be time consuming to match up that copy
with the underlying DITA source.



I am updating this issue to mark it as closed for future comments, as it is now past the deadline
for incorporating comments.  Please add any additional comments to a new JIRA issue with a
fixin for a future release.  Thanks!

> Doc review (CLOSED TO FURTHER COMMENTS):  Getting Started with Derby
> --------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>          Key: DERBY-379
>          URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-379
>      Project: Derby
>         Type: Improvement
>   Components: Documentation
>  Environment: all
>     Reporter: Jeff Levitt
>     Priority: Minor
>      Fix For: 10.1.1.0

>
> This issue tracks comments for the Getting Started with Derby manual. The deadline for
posting comments was Tuesday, June 28, noon Pacific time.
> PLEASE DO NOT POST ADDITIONAL COMMENTS TO THIS JIRA ISSUE.  If you have additional comments,
please open a JIRA issue for a fixin in a future release, as there is not enough time to incorporate
additional comments.
> Some guidelines to follow when posting comments to this issue are:
> - Try to make clear and concise comments about what you want changed whenever possible.
 Provide concrete comments that say "Please change <original> to <modified>" instead
of generic comments like "This section needs to be rewritten."
> - If you're reviewing the HTML Files copy, include the URL for the page in the review
comment. Obtain the URL like this:
>     * highlight the topic in the left frame
>     * right click
>     * choose "Properties"
>     * copy and paste the address in the pop up box.
> - If you're reviewing the PDF copy, in the review comment:
>     * Include the page number for the PDF, and indicate whether the number is the PDF
sheet number or the printed page number.
>     * Include the title of the section that the problem occurs in. If it's in a subsection,
try to include the hierarchy of titles.
> - Please don't review the HTML Book copy -- it'll be time consuming to match up that
copy with the underlying DITA source.

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