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From "Stan Bradbury (JIRA)" <derby-...@db.apache.org>
Subject [jira] Commented: (DERBY-382) Doc Review: Derby Reference Manual
Date Fri, 24 Jun 2005 23:32:57 GMT
    [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-382?page=comments#action_12314440 ] 

Stan Bradbury commented on DERBY-382:

Stan's Review of:   %%% Reference Guide:  SQL-92 Compliance section:

This consists of a single table that spans approximately 5 pages in the PDF document.  Because
the columns in this table were jumbled I used the following HTML document from the IBM Cloudscape
10 site for this review.  Use this source URL as the basis for the table update:  http://publib.boulder.ibm.com/infocenter/cldscp10/index.jsp?topic=/com.ibm.cloudscape.doc/sqlj151.htm
	Reference Manual
	Version 10 

>> The right column sub items under  'Privilege tables' need to have 'no' placed in
the right-hand column - e.g.: 

>> Delete the extra 's' at end of left column sting (constantss):
' Compound character string constantss '

>> We implemented INTERSECT in v 10.1.  Change right column value to 'yes'
  for right column value 'INTERSECT' (sub item of 'Table Operations')

> Doc Review: Derby Reference Manual
> ----------------------------------
>          Key: DERBY-382
>          URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-382
>      Project: Derby
>         Type: Improvement
>   Components: Documentation
>  Environment: all
>     Reporter: Jeff Levitt
>     Priority: Minor
>      Fix For:

> This issue tracks comments for the Derby Reference Manual. The deadline for posting comments
is Tuesday, June 28, noon Pacific time.
> Some guidelines to follow when posting comments to this issue are:
> - Try to make clear and concise comments about what you want changed whenever possible.
 Provide concrete comments that say "Please change <original> to <modified>" instead
of generic comments like "This section needs to be rewritten."
> - If you're reviewing the HTML Files copy, include the URL for the page in the review
comment. Obtain the URL like this:
>     * highlight the topic in the left frame
>     * right click
>     * choose "Properties"
>     * copy and paste the address in the pop up box.
> - If you're reviewing the PDF copy, in the review comment:
>     * Include the page number for the PDF, and indicate whether the number is the PDF
sheet number or the printed page number.
>     * Include the title of the section that the problem occurs in. If it's in a subsection,
try to include the hierarchy of titles.
> - Please don't review the HTML Book copy -- it'll be time consuming to match up that
copy with the underlying DITA source.

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