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From "Jeff Levitt (JIRA)" <derby-...@db.apache.org>
Subject [jira] Updated: (DERBY-381) Doc review (CLOSED TO FURTHER COMMENTS): Derby Server and Admin Guide
Date Wed, 29 Jun 2005 21:14:58 GMT
     [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-381?page=all ]

Jeff Levitt updated DERBY-381:
------------------------------

    Attachment: derby381.diff

 The attached patch makes the changes requested in this doc review. I have created sample
output on my own site:

HTML files: http://derby.mylevita.com/adminguide/
PDF: http://derby.mylevita.com/adminguide/derbyadmin.pdf

The patch affects EVERY dita file, but not the content for each file. This is because I modified
the year in the dita source file copyrights for each file from "2004" to "2005". So while
every file is listed in the patch, the only changes that will appear in the PDF and HTML files
are those requested in this doc review.

Also, note that I have made the change to the trademarks page in the same way that I did to
the Getting Started guide patch in Derby-379.

> Doc review (CLOSED TO FURTHER COMMENTS): Derby Server and Admin Guide
> ---------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>          Key: DERBY-381
>          URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-381
>      Project: Derby
>         Type: Improvement
>   Components: Documentation
>  Environment: all
>     Reporter: Jeff Levitt
>     Priority: Minor
>      Fix For: 10.1.1.0
>  Attachments: derby381.diff
>
> This issue tracks comments for the Derby Server and Administration Guide. The deadline
for posting comments WAS Tuesday, June 28, noon Pacific time.
> PLEASE DO NOT POST ADDITIONAL COMMENTS TO THIS JIRA ISSUE.  If you have additional comments,
please open a JIRA issue for a fixin in a future release, as there is not enough time to incorporate
additional comments.
> Some guidelines to follow when posting comments to this issue are:
> - Try to make clear and concise comments about what you want changed whenever possible.
 Provide concrete comments that say "Please change <original> to <modified>" instead
of generic comments like "This section needs to be rewritten."
> - If you're reviewing the HTML Files copy, include the URL for the page in the review
comment. Obtain the URL like this:
>     * highlight the topic in the left frame
>     * right click
>     * choose "Properties"
>     * copy and paste the address in the pop up box.
> - If you're reviewing the PDF copy, in the review comment:
>     * Include the page number for the PDF, and indicate whether the number is the PDF
sheet number or the printed page number.
>     * Include the title of the section that the problem occurs in. If it's in a subsection,
try to include the hierarchy of titles.
> - Please don't review the HTML Book copy -- it'll be time consuming to match up that
copy with the underlying DITA source.

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