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From "Kathey Marsden (JIRA)" <derby-...@db.apache.org>
Subject [jira] Commented: (DERBY-381) Doc review: Derby Server and Admin Guide
Date Tue, 28 Jun 2005 18:43:00 GMT
    [ http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-381?page=comments#action_12314632 ] 

Kathey Marsden commented on DERBY-381:
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GENERAL
	Remove mydomain.com from all examples e.g
	e.g. change "myserver.mydomain.com" to just "myserver"



PAGE 9

CHANGE 
This part of the guide is divided into sections discussing the Network Server.

TO
is part of the guide is divided into sections discussing the Network Server and other server
frameworks.

page 13
Under Shutting down by using the API

REMOVE:
To do so, use the following syntax:
shutdown();

NEW TEXT 
You can use the NetworkServerControl API to shut down the Network Server from within a Java
application. 

For example ...


page 18,19
Examples 1,2, & 3 remove the trailing ;
  

Page 20
Universal Driver System information
The Derby Network Server is compatible with the DB2 JDBC Universal Driver release 1.2 and
higher.
Should read version 2.4 and higher


page 32 
The url for the servlet should be:
 http://<server>[:port]/derby/derbynet





> Doc review: Derby Server and Admin Guide
> ----------------------------------------
>
>          Key: DERBY-381
>          URL: http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/DERBY-381
>      Project: Derby
>         Type: Improvement
>   Components: Documentation
>  Environment: all
>     Reporter: Jeff Levitt
>     Priority: Minor
>      Fix For: 10.1.1.0

>
> This issue tracks comments for the Derby Server and Administration Guide. The deadline
for posting comments is Tuesday, June 28, noon Pacific time.
> Some guidelines to follow when posting comments to this issue are:
> - Try to make clear and concise comments about what you want changed whenever possible.
 Provide concrete comments that say "Please change <original> to <modified>" instead
of generic comments like "This section needs to be rewritten."
> - If you're reviewing the HTML Files copy, include the URL for the page in the review
comment. Obtain the URL like this:
>     * highlight the topic in the left frame
>     * right click
>     * choose "Properties"
>     * copy and paste the address in the pop up box.
> - If you're reviewing the PDF copy, in the review comment:
>     * Include the page number for the PDF, and indicate whether the number is the PDF
sheet number or the printed page number.
>     * Include the title of the section that the problem occurs in. If it's in a subsection,
try to include the hierarchy of titles.
> - Please don't review the HTML Book copy -- it'll be time consuming to match up that
copy with the underlying DITA source.

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