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Date: Tue, 12 Sep 2006 00:04:11 -0000
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Subject: [Db-derby Wiki] Update of "GettingStartedTenTwo" by MyrnavanLunteren

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http://wiki.apache.org/db-derby/GettingStartedTenTwo

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  Please list the sections you intend to review in the summary table below: 
  
  || '''Section Name''' || '''Reviewers''' || '''Status''' ||
- ||[#entirebook Entire Book (18 pages)] || || ||
+ ||[#entirebook Entire Book (18 pages)] || Myrna || In progress with patch 1223 modifications ||
  
  === Sub Section Details ===
  
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  [[Anchor(entirebook)]]''' Entire Book :'''
  
  ||'''Sub Section''' || '''HTML Url''' or '''PDF Page''' || '''Reviewer'''|| '''Comment''' ||'''Resolution''' ||
- || Installing Derby || http://db.apache.org/derby/docs/dev/getstart/cgsinstallingderby.html || Kim Haase || Fourth bullet: directory name should be "docs", not "doc". || ||
+ || Installing Derby || cgsinstallingderby.html || Kim Haase || Fourth bullet: directory name should be "docs", not "doc". || ||
+ || Installing Derby || cgsinstallingderby.html || Myrna || Missing from this list is "test" which includes the jar for the functional Tests, the apache jakarta jar that's needed, and a README on which other files are needed and how to run the tests. Q: should we mention frameworks as something that is going to be deprecated?|| ||
+ || Setting up your environment || tgssetupjavaenvir.html || Myrna || Although it is pretty obvious, I would suggest adding that all tools and commands need to be done in an appropriate command shell. Something like, "[...] correctly. These scripts require an appropriate shell environment, i.e. a 'Command Prompt' window on Windows, and a shell on Unix." || ||
+ || Setting up your environment || tgssetupjavaenvir.html || Myrna ||  step 1, only the Windows command is mentioned. I suggest adding a unix shell command similar to the other steps, something like: "Similarly, if you installed in /opt/Derby-10.1 on Unix, you would use: export DERBY_HOME=/opt/Derby-10.1" || ||
+ || Setting up your environment || tgssetupjavaenvir.html || Myrna ||  step 3, the Windows command is missing closing % after %DERBY_HOME. i.e. should be: %DERBY_HOME%\bin;%PATH% || ||
+ || Setting up your environment || tgssetupjavaenvir.html || Myrna || step 3, last line..., the text is somewhat inaccurate. I suggest: "When the DERBY_HOME environment variable is set and the underlying bin directory is included in the PATH environment variable like this, you can use shortened commands [...]"  || ||
+ || Setting up your environment || cgsusingtoolsutils.html || Myrna || example first bullet, although it will work also, I think it is better to not include the last semi-colon. That's really jcc/ibm unversal driver syntax.  || ||