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Subject [Db-derby Wiki] Update of "GettingStartedTenTwo" by MyrnavanLunteren
Date Fri, 22 Sep 2006 00:46:24 GMT
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The following page has been changed by MyrnavanLunteren:
http://wiki.apache.org/db-derby/GettingStartedTenTwo

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  Please list the sections you intend to review in the summary table below: 
  
  || '''Section Name''' || '''Reviewers''' || '''Status''' || || Comments ||
- ||[#entirebook Entire Book (18 pages)] || Myrna || Complete || ||
+ ||[#entirebook Entire Book (18 pages)] || Myrna || Complete || Making a patch for comments
so far||
  ||[#entirebook Entire Book (18 pages)] || Andrew || Complete || The other suggested changes
from Kim and Myrna also look good to me. ||
  
  === Sub Section Details ===
@@ -28, +28 @@

  || Libraries provided by Derby || rgslib46043.html || Andrew || Libraries should be made
singular in each section that only has a single library. In the tools library section, "you
need a library" should be "you need this library". || ||
  || Database connection URL || rgsquck30197.html || Andrew || It would be nice to not have
a line break in the middle of the network client URL example. || ||
  || SQL Syntax || rgsdocs10012.html || Myrna || 1. Reference to 'IBM Software Development
Kit style for setting JVM arguments and properties'. Section should get replaced with something
generic, like 'This documentation attempts to be JVM neutral, but any command line examples
or syntax using JVM specific references should be verified with your specific JVM documentation.'
Or the section could be just left out. 2. In the dita source there are some very interesting
characters around the "or" instead of double quotes. I have no idea how html knows to change
that into "or", but maybe we don't need the quotes (nor the peculiar characters). || ||
+ || Libraries provided by Derby || rgslib46043.html || Myrna || List should also mention
derbyrun.jar. || ||
  

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