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From rdon...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r1366750 - /creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/3rd-party-individual.apt
Date Sat, 28 Jul 2012 19:30:06 GMT
Author: rdonkin
Date: Sat Jul 28 19:30:05 2012
New Revision: 1366750

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1366750&view=rev
Log:
Improved phrasing

Modified:
    creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/3rd-party-individual.apt

Modified: creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/3rd-party-individual.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/3rd-party-individual.apt?rev=1366750&r1=1366749&r2=1366750&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/3rd-party-individual.apt (original)
+++ creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/3rd-party-individual.apt Sat Jul 28 19:30:05
2012
@@ -364,8 +364,8 @@ With An Individual Third Party Work
   As far as Whisker is
   concerned, data about an individual maintainer (like <Sam Smith>) is
   entered as an {{{../faq.html#what-is-org}organisation}}. 
-  After checking that <Sam Smith> isn't already described in the 
-  <<<organisations>>>, we find that an <<<organisation>>>
+  By checking that <Sam Smith> isn't already described in the 
+  <<<organisations>>>, we discover that an <<<organisation>>>
   needs to be added. Pay particular attention to the <<<id>>> -
   we'll need to refer to this later when the contents are updated.
   For this example, we'll {{{../faq.html#id-freedom}pick}} 



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