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From rdon...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r1366724 - /creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/3rd-party-individual.apt
Date Sat, 28 Jul 2012 18:26:01 GMT
Author: rdonkin
Date: Sat Jul 28 18:26:00 2012
New Revision: 1366724

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1366724&view=rev
Log:
Improvements to phrasing

Modified:
    creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/3rd-party-individual.apt

Modified: creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/3rd-party-individual.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/3rd-party-individual.apt?rev=1366724&r1=1366723&r2=1366724&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/3rd-party-individual.apt (original)
+++ creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/3rd-party-individual.apt Sat Jul 28 18:26:00
2012
@@ -390,10 +390,10 @@ With An Individual Third Party Work
 +---------------------------------------+
   foo--| 
        | HelloWorld.py
-       | boo.png
+       | boo.png         <- Newly added
 +---------------------------------------+
 
-  We need to add <<<boo.png>>> to the contents, to a new group of resources
+  We need to add <<<boo.png>>> to the contents, into a new group of resources
   within the {{{../faq.html#how-root-dir}root directory}}. Resources
   are grouped by organisation, so the <<<by-organisation>>> containing
   the new resource named <<<boo.png>>> needs to refer (by <<<id>>>)

@@ -421,7 +421,7 @@ With An Individual Third Party Work
   If <Sam Smith> had distributed a <<<NOTICE>>> for this resource,
then 
   (after finding that the <<<NOTICE>>> is not already included) a
   <<<notice>>> description would need to be added to <<<notices>>>
-  above and referenced by id from the resource. 
+  above and referenced by id from the resource. Something like:
   
 +---------------------------------------+
     ...



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