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From rdon...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r1363510 - /creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/in-5-mins.apt
Date Thu, 19 Jul 2012 20:00:23 GMT
Author: rdonkin
Date: Thu Jul 19 20:00:22 2012
New Revision: 1363510

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1363510&view=rev
Log:
Improved phrasing

Modified:
    creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/in-5-mins.apt

Modified: creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/in-5-mins.apt
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/in-5-mins.apt?rev=1363510&r1=1363509&r2=1363510&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/in-5-mins.apt (original)
+++ creadur/whisker/trunk/src/site/apt/examples/in-5-mins.apt Thu Jul 19 20:00:22 2012
@@ -26,13 +26,14 @@ Whisker In 5 Minutes
 
  {{{http://creadur.apache.org/whisker} Apache Whisker}} is based around
  {{{../meta-data.html}meta-data}} describing the licensing qualities
- of documents included within complex software distributions. This
- separates information about <which> documents are distributed 
+ of documents included within complex software distributions. 
+ <Which> documents are distributed is separated 
  from <what> these documents are. 
  
  For this example, we'll create meta-data for a simple 
  {{{http://opensource.org/licenses/mit-license.php/}MIT licensed}} 
- project.  
+ project. This illustrates any project where
+ a NOTICE is not (necessarily) required.
  
  
 * Basic Structure



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