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From rdon...@apache.org
Subject svn commit: r1348589 - /creadur/site/trunk/content/boardreport.mdtext
Date Sun, 10 Jun 2012 13:49:31 GMT
Author: rdonkin
Date: Sun Jun 10 13:49:31 2012
New Revision: 1348589

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1348589&view=rev
Log:
Some phrasing improvements

Modified:
    creadur/site/trunk/content/boardreport.mdtext

Modified: creadur/site/trunk/content/boardreport.mdtext
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/creadur/site/trunk/content/boardreport.mdtext?rev=1348589&r1=1348588&r2=1348589&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- creadur/site/trunk/content/boardreport.mdtext (original)
+++ creadur/site/trunk/content/boardreport.mdtext Sun Jun 10 13:49:31 2012
@@ -73,22 +73,18 @@ Just a draft: see the board minutes for 
 
     Releases
     --------
-    None (yet). The last release happened while the project was incubating, it was
-    RAT 0.8 released in November 2011.
+    None (yet). The last release happened while the project was 
+    incubating, it was RAT 0.8 released in November 2011.
 
-    Creadur hopes to cut the first release of Apache Whisker once the handover
-    is complete.
-
-    Apache Whisker is a tool that generates and audits licensing information
-    from meta-data. It aims to simplify the issues faced by complex applications 
-    assembled from many components (for example, Apache James Server has over 100).
-    It is ready for an initial release, which would hopefully raise visibility
-    and encourage more contributions both from within Apache and without.
+    Creadur hopes to cut the first release of Apache Whisker once 
+    soon. This tool generates and audits licensing information
+    from meta-data. Helpful for applications assembled from 100s of 
+    components, such as Apache James Server.
 
     Branding and Trademarks
     -----------------------
-    Currently our website doesn't conform to all requirements, in particular the product
-    subsites don't.    
+    Currently our website doesn't conform to all requirements. 
+    In particular the product subsites need more work. 
 
     Community Objectives
     --------------------



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