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From ermouth <ermo...@gmail.com>
Subject Re: CouchDB website: contributing redesign / text help
Date Tue, 12 May 2015 12:22:54 GMT
>I left my suggestions here:
> Here are my suggestions:

Collegues, if you have someone who is a) native English speaker, b) has
skills in writing good copy – could you please ask him/her to review the
source?

Both @Jan and @Alexander texts have good subtle moments – but they both are
not enough good for landing, sorry. As well as my texts.

May be @Johs could help? His biz requires strong copy skills, so may be he
has someone in-staff?

> "Help us" sounds like as we're in catastrophic position (:

I decided 2 cries are acceptable, 3 is too much )

ermouth

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